She was cool didn't care
Had a stony cold stare
That went through any sight she'd behold
With a lick of her lips
A quick shake of the hips
She transformed from copper to gold
In an instant she'd strike
Have his head on a spike
How he savored this bittersweet pain
And when done of the floor
She would open the door
Sent him out to get soaked in the rain
She had taken her fill
Smoked a joint popped a pill
Cast him off like he didn't exist
Left alone with her head
She just curled up in bed
That's another one chalked off the list
In the morning she'd rise
To a massive surprise
He had waited all night for this bitch
But she threw him that look
It was all it had took
Never mess with a hungover witch
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Ohhhhh boy!! Dangerous!! I love the title too (Witches brew). FYI I have a cauldron where I burn letters and create spells. 😆 Loved it!
Ah that explains why so many are under your spell
My wee sister was born on Halloween
Thank you LIZ
Always appreciate the visit
Much obliged
Awwwww 🙈 you're too kind!! Thank you!! ❤️
Bewitchingly perfect!
Thank you Rilla
Truly appreciate such a comment
Extremely grateful
This flows like a spell or a song. Great rhythm!
Thank you very much for such a kind comment
Appreciate it
Truly grateful
She's intense, electrifying, dangerous, all wrapped up in wonderful verse, with a great zinger at the end. Love it all!
Much appreciated Bella
Extremely grateful as always
Many thanks
Oh wow, Stevie! This is truly a masterpiece! As I read it aloud, I had to slow down so I could get in all the detail. Superb! Simply excellent! What more can I say? This really took the cake! Christina
So kind and supportive Christina
Never be able to thank you enough for continued encouragement and friendship
A wee star always shining
Wonderful imagery you provide in this well rhyming write! Love the last line to this, as it not only summarizes,, but truly emphasizes. Great writing
Thank you pop
Appreciate the read comment and visit
Very much
proud of you
Thank you
We can but try
I love your style, rhyme, flow and imagery! Perfection!
And I love that comment
Truly appreciate your time to read
Extremely grateful
Many thanks
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