Immersed deep in the blue sea
A lion, be it spirit, holy, or me
Be it delusion, vision, or dream
Be it courage, or solitude, only me
I could see, a heart on fire, in the crimson sky, outline of a person with mane and free
I fear that noone can see, Tantum me
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Author:
Parisab (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Dream journal from this morning
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This is beautiful! đź’š
I appreciate you taking delight in my scribbles about a dream I had to share, poet friend…
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals
Alone or solemn
Or A NSAID anti inflammatory
That aside, it’s such a thought provoking piece at a really high level. As always, XOXO
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals
Alone or solemn
Or A NSAID anti inflammatory
That aside, it’s such a thought provoking piece at a really high level. As always, XOXO
Regards to you and your engagement with these words…
I hope that this finds you in great health…
first and last line, bookend
and contextualise, such a fantastical
poet wording of our imagination
carrying us to thought pathways
we never knew we were capable of
I believe dreams, are simultaneously
irrelevant and consequential
they're often a projection
of the things we notice but keep
repressed
or, that we dwell-on relentlessly
it's always, what we see in them
that defines their relevance..
but purely as a reading experience
this was such a wonderful poetic delight
thank you! dear cherished Poet
I sincerely thank for your great interpretationً poet peer
Beautiful in flow, imagery and perspective. Wonderfully written.
Greatly appreciate your reading and connecting with this piece,Pop64
Beautiful imagery within. đź’–
Thank you for your kind comment, dear Teddy…
Such a dream, described in such beautiful words.
So kind always!
outstanding poem as always
Thank you-You are so cool, Vivid! Write on!!
I’m so glad you found this piece engaging, Maxine:)
you can beat an egg but you just can't beat a bloomin good dreamscape ..
My mind cooks up some interesting dream escapes lately, I hope that you enjoyed-thank you as always for your read…
Thought provoking and enigmatic in its symbols. They may be taken several ways and are left open to interpretation which is wonderful in and of itself. It allows the reader to project a bit of themselves into it.
Thank you for your thoughtful insight and accurate interpretation, poet friend…
Absolutely amazing dreamscape..
So grateful you enjoyed my scribbles…
Amazing work, as always.
Thankful as always…
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