Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes

Neville

Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes

 

Just in case you

had not

already guessed ..

I so want

to drown in those

big brown,

caramel eyes,

of yours ..

Oh’ but oh so

very slow indeed ..

Oh’ yes,

I so want to feel

myself melting

and deeply ..

All the way down

to that,

stricken lost soul

of yours ..

Where I might

just be permitted

to dispense

once and for all

with this searching ..

To discard

the weight of my

longing

and to finally feel,

for once at least,

that innermost

heat of you darling ..

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 2nd, 2023 01:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: for brown eyed girls everywhere because brown is gonna be this years, new blue ..
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 25
  • Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, MissD, Bella Shepard, L. B. Mek
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  • orchidee

    KP has caramel eyes - it's the botox that does it, you see! lol

    • Neville


      I see 😎

    • Doggerel Dave

      I was gonna say 'bet you say that to all the girls' but you pre-empted me when you commented...
      Well, of one thing we can be fairly certain - you ain't colour blind , otherwise you would have been in trouble years ago....

      • Neville



        wot do you mean could have been .. I have rarely been out of it .. now where did the sky go .. 😎💙

      • Bobby O

        To discard the weight of my longing
        Next appropriate moment with your permission I may steal this word for word
        I enjoy

        • Neville



          my pleasure entirely .. and you are most welcome sir .. Neville

        • LIZ

          Well damn!! Stop playing with me Neville!! "Oh’ but oh so very slow indeed.. Oh’ yes, I so want to feel myself melting and deeply ..All the way down to that, stricken lost soul of yours"- Is there any other way? Took me to paradise! Closed my eyes for a moment! And...ummmm I have dark brown eyes. UFFFF! 💜 Deep....DEEP!

          • Neville



            ........................................................ indeed UFFFF 💜

          • orchidee

            I wish to complain about the abundance of 'UFFF' on 'ere - if I knew what it is?! heehee.
            Now me next poem, not deep, but 'Shallow!'😁

          • Teddy.15

            LOL 🤣 van Morrison would be proud, although I am a blue eyed gal, I too adore the brown eyes exotic and beautiful. Beautiful imagery dearest Nev. 💖

            • Neville



              Good old Van .. my mate Tonk was the mans longest serving saxophonist by all accounts .. 12 solid years ❤️

            • Bella Shepard

              Your poem puts me in mind of the Van Morrison song "Brown eyed girl". Sweet, salted, carmel, melt in your mouth descriptive and delicious. You do honor to the brown eyed, and to your lady love. Verse to tempt the senses. Beautiful!

              • Neville



                and I in turn, am honoured, thank you Bella .. Neville

              • L. B. Mek

                'All the way down
                to that,
                stricken lost soul
                of yours ..

                Where I might
                just be permitted
                to dispense
                once and for all'

                'To discard
                the weight of my
                longing
                and to finally feel,

                for once at least,'
                !!! BRILLIANT !!!
                the Poet supreme
                this is why, I am such a grateful fan
                oh most talented friend of mind
                (once more
                I humbly bow to your Superior talent
                Hyung!)

                • Neville



                  henceforth, a discreet curtsey will more than suffice .. I shall bow to thee brother Mek .. Neville

                  • L. B. Mek

                    good poetry overwhelms me
                    so I get carried away and discreet
                    becomes an alien notion, lol
                    (thanks for putting up with me)
                    🍻

                    • Neville



                      I am still appropriately bowed



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