Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
Just in case you
had not
already guessed ..
I so want
to drown in those
big brown,
caramel eyes,
of yours ..
Oh’ but oh so
very slow indeed ..
Oh’ yes,
I so want to feel
myself melting
and deeply ..
All the way down
to that,
stricken lost soul
of yours ..
Where I might
just be permitted
to dispense
once and for all
with this searching ..
To discard
the weight of my
longing
and to finally feel,
for once at least,
that innermost
heat of you darling ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: September 2nd, 2023 01:49
- Comment from author about the poem: for brown eyed girls everywhere because brown is gonna be this years, new blue ..
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- Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, MissD, Bella Shepard, L. B. Mek.
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Comments8
KP has caramel eyes - it's the botox that does it, you see! lol
I see 😎
I was gonna say 'bet you say that to all the girls' but you pre-empted me when you commented...
Well, of one thing we can be fairly certain - you ain't colour blind , otherwise you would have been in trouble years ago....
wot do you mean could have been .. I have rarely been out of it .. now where did the sky go .. 😎💙
To discard the weight of my longing
Next appropriate moment with your permission I may steal this word for word
I enjoy
my pleasure entirely .. and you are most welcome sir .. Neville
Well damn!! Stop playing with me Neville!! "Oh’ but oh so very slow indeed.. Oh’ yes, I so want to feel myself melting and deeply ..All the way down to that, stricken lost soul of yours"- Is there any other way? Took me to paradise! Closed my eyes for a moment! And...ummmm I have dark brown eyes. UFFFF! 💜 Deep....DEEP!
........................................................ indeed UFFFF 💜
I wish to complain about the abundance of 'UFFF' on 'ere - if I knew what it is?! heehee.
Now me next poem, not deep, but 'Shallow!'😁
LOL 🤣 van Morrison would be proud, although I am a blue eyed gal, I too adore the brown eyes exotic and beautiful. Beautiful imagery dearest Nev. 💖
Good old Van .. my mate Tonk was the mans longest serving saxophonist by all accounts .. 12 solid years ❤️
Your poem puts me in mind of the Van Morrison song "Brown eyed girl". Sweet, salted, carmel, melt in your mouth descriptive and delicious. You do honor to the brown eyed, and to your lady love. Verse to tempt the senses. Beautiful!
and I in turn, am honoured, thank you Bella .. Neville
'All the way down
to that,
stricken lost soul
of yours ..
Where I might
just be permitted
to dispense
once and for all'
'To discard
the weight of my
longing
and to finally feel,
for once at least,'
!!! BRILLIANT !!!
the Poet supreme
this is why, I am such a grateful fan
oh most talented friend of mind
(once more
I humbly bow to your Superior talent
Hyung!)
henceforth, a discreet curtsey will more than suffice .. I shall bow to thee brother Mek .. Neville
good poetry overwhelms me
so I get carried away and discreet
becomes an alien notion, lol
(thanks for putting up with me)
🍻
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