Unselfish Ramble
Future memories so alive they won’t erase
Certain they include an undeserving glance at her lovely face
A magical mystique my quest to chase
Finding will complete
Hope stays forever new
Tell her this magic box
Only her power unlocks
it might see us through
Digits open a pristine view
Unselfish valor will display
She is my first and last
A brave step erases past
Caution cast just far enough away
Finesse flavored with fierce freshly fountains forevered New Day
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Author:
Bobby O (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Maybe she will know this is for her
- Category: Love
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Comments6
I hope she sees this!
Sweet write!
'this magic box
Only her power unlocks'
🤌🏽choice rhyming!
This is great!
You are the best. When I grow up I wanna ….
Magic!!!! This is my favorite one! See, I knew you were a romantic at heart!! "She is my first and last" Mmmmm
oh wow! I'm lighting a candle to this, and basking in the energy you've so bravely displayed! Beautiful! Thank you! 💋💕
At least you’re keeping it a secret?
😉
‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how marvelous that you setting a stage with everything beautiful, for her-May you keep celebrating many birthdays and to keep absorbing the best with your taste…
You make this site fun for me and I’m always grateful for your thoughtful response. You got it going on Girl
This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a guitar solo.Just saying.Well done
Appropo.
I thought this was gonna be about a walk/ramble ya had in the countryside or summat.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
It was intended to speak to a beautiful lady and that’s when I tend to ramble. There no doubt are better titles but my brain couldn’t focus. I’ll take any suggestion
Good write B. I use 'ramble' too. Better than using 'waffling'?!
Dig!
Wonderful and may she definately hopefully know it's for her. 💖
Yes. Was gonna try for subtle but I’m too anxious so I will chicken out and orchestrate obvious. I wish I could be smoother but risk seems scary. Thanks for the read and nice words.
You only live once! 💖
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