UNSELFISH RAMBLE

Bobby O

Unselfish Ramble

Future memories so alive they won’t erase
Certain they include an undeserving  glance at her lovely  face
A magical mystique my quest to chase
Finding will complete
Hope stays forever new
Tell her  this magic box 
Only her power unlocks
 it might see us through 
Digits open a pristine view 
Unselfish valor will display

She is my first and last
A brave step erases past

Caution cast just far enough away

Finesse flavored with fierce freshly fountains forevered New Day

  • Author: Bobby O (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 8th, 2023 18:21
  • Comment from author about the poem: Maybe she will know this is for her
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 8
  • Users favorite of this poem: Introverted Sage, LIZ.
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Comments6

  • Introverted Sage

    I hope she sees this!

    Sweet write!

    'this magic box
    Only her power unlocks'

    🤌🏽choice rhyming!
    This is great!

    • Bobby O

      You are the best. When I grow up I wanna ….

    • LIZ

      Magic!!!! This is my favorite one! See, I knew you were a romantic at heart!! "She is my first and last" Mmmmm
      oh wow! I'm lighting a candle to this, and basking in the energy you've so bravely displayed! Beautiful! Thank you! 💋💕

      • Bobby O

        At least you’re keeping it a secret?

        • LIZ

          😉

        • Parisab

          ‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how marvelous that you setting a stage with everything beautiful, for her-May you keep celebrating many birthdays and to keep absorbing the best with your taste…

          • Bobby O

            You make this site fun for me and I’m always grateful for your thoughtful response. You got it going on Girl

          • David Wakeling

            This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a guitar solo.Just saying.Well done

            • Bobby O

              Appropo.

            • orchidee

              I thought this was gonna be about a walk/ramble ya had in the countryside or summat.
              Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.

              • Bobby O

                It was intended to speak to a beautiful lady and that’s when I tend to ramble. There no doubt are better titles but my brain couldn’t focus. I’ll take any suggestion

                • orchidee

                  Good write B. I use 'ramble' too. Better than using 'waffling'?!

                • 1 more comment

                • Teddy.15

                  Wonderful and may she definately hopefully know it's for her. 💖

                  • Bobby O

                    Yes. Was gonna try for subtle but I’m too anxious so I will chicken out and orchestrate obvious. I wish I could be smoother but risk seems scary. Thanks for the read and nice words.

                    • Teddy.15

                      You only live once! 💖



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