Please don't answer my heartbeat now sounds like the crack 

Of the whip used to peel all the skin from my back 

No more tales about how you perform in the sack 

Close your legs and try opening your eyes 


Keep the pictures it took you so long to prepare 

Where your hand slips inside your new silk underwear 

Feeding frenzy of sharks on a chocolate eclair 

Fantasy titillation and lies


Time to stop throwing all of your toys from your pram 

Every window's been smashed there's no more doors to slam

Forming ripples in all the deep waters you swam

Seeking innocent natural highs


I had took her all in even asked for some more 

Almost handed her keys to come through my front door 

Even old fools eventually wise up to the score

All that heat was just frost in disguise 


She has settled again and is doing so well 

If the clock's really ticking time can't help but tell 

I would say it was magic but know I can't spel 

Her spark met my combustible skies 

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 13th, 2023 07:07
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 12
  • User favorite of this poem: LIZ.
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  • LIZ

    Damn!!!! Pain! I love this! BUT, this line: "Please don't answer my heartbeat now sounds like the crack, Of the whip used to peel all the skin from my back" is GOLD! It lets me know exactly where you're going. Deception is a horrible crime!! I totally enjoyed it! Oh and I love the title!!!

    • peto

      Ah magic
      Thank you very much for such a glowing review

    • Teddy.15

      play 2 🤣 however a shockingly good write, full of irony anger and disappointment which in fact is what love can be. Super my dear Peto. May the sky explode into confetti of love someday 💖

      • peto

        Thank you Teddy
        Appreciate the visit and comment as always
        Much obliged

      • Introverted Sage

        Nice rhyme and flow!
        Sounds like an intense electromagnetic connection you have there.
        Intriguing write!

        • peto

          Had sage had
          Thank you very much
          Always a delight to see you

        • Christina8

          Well put together, you! There is a hint of sadness but as always love finds her way to you in the end. love the cadence and rhyme in this one a lot! Awesome!

          • peto

            Thank you Christina
            Very much appreciated as always

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