Sorrow running through my veins
I have a headache
It's killing me
At the same time
I thinking about my life
I don't know comfort
I don't know peace
I'm god's unfortunate Man
Unimportant one
Who hasn't got a great line
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Author:
Serhat Doğan (
Offline) - Published: September 14th, 2023 14:17
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Comments3
Fake it til you make it
I agree man
never knock yourself .. there will always be plenty of folk that will do that and I am very impressed with your writing thus far my new found literary friend .. Neville
From a man who is dealing with a lot of crap at the time- great advice!
"Who hasn't got a great line"
paradoxically great line
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