Sorrow running through my veins
I have a headache
It's killing me
At the same time
I thinking about my life
I don't know comfort
I don't know peace
I'm god's unfortunate Man
Unimportant one
Who hasn't got a great line
- Author: Serhat Doğan ( Offline)
- Published: September 14th, 2023 14:17
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 17
Comments4
Fake it til you make it
I agree man
never knock yourself .. there will always be plenty of folk that will do that and I am very impressed with your writing thus far my new found literary friend .. Neville
From a man who is dealing with a lot of crap at the time- great advice!
I believe that regardless of the context and condition you are in, this is the right attitude: give your pain to God because:
" Keep your mind in hell and do not despair" and "As for those who consider themselves worthy to be exalted without drinking from the cup of descent, the Lord tells them without any equivocation: 'You do not know what you are asking'".
Wow! Thx
"Who hasn't got a great line"
paradoxically great line
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