The full moon set her beams loose
To dance on the sea
Shooting stars fell to earth
After winking at me
Gentle waves kiss the shoreline
Who's passionate plea
Brought a tear to my red bloodshot eye
It's a sight to be shared
As I stand on my own
A sharp intake of breath
A quick snap on my phone
Nature's majesty sings
Memories lower the tone
A storm forms in my red bloodshot eye
When she left all my demons
Raced out of their cage
Leaving only a shell
For a fireball of rage
A thesaurus reduced
To a blank empty page
Stained by tears from my red bloodshot eye
An emotional cripple
Who's broken his crutch
Hollow fingers unable
To feel what they touch
When you're left with so little
It all seems too much
Seeing life through my red bloodshot eye
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Author:
peto (
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Comments7
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing ) we all need that something to calm us and make us feel better .. and nature can really help how we feel
A very good writing .. which I liked reading
I especially like the first verse .. beautiful words
Much obliged Violet
Always grateful to see you grace my page
The moon and I absolutely gorgeous dear Peto your imagery is truly breathtaking. 💖
Thank you Teddy
Great support that is very much appreciated
Incredible piece Peto,
Absolutely incredible 👏 🙌 😍
incredible comment
Thank you very much
Extremely grateful
Is this a new rhyme scheme? Love it! I really enjoyed the last stanza, you show so much with your amazing imagery! Thanks for improving my Saturday!!
Hi Christina
Thank you very much for continuing to look me up
Very much appreciate your read and input
"A thesaurus reduced
To a blank empty page
Stained by tears from my red bloodshot eye "
I have no words to express the amount of amazing-ness that this poem beholds within itself! This is beautiful
Rilla
An extremely pleasant comment for me to read
Truly appreciate your time
Many thanks
The way you weave your words is so magical.
Perhaps sharing from the heart is what makes your poems so captivating..
I appreciate the emotion.
At any rate.. this one's another great!
Thanks for sharing!
Great comment sage
Thank you
Almost like you feel rather than read what I wrote
Amazing feedback
Much obliged
Just so majestic!!
Thank you Drhu
Lovely to see you here
Appreciate your time to read and comment
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