A Very Brief Moment 

Teddy.15

 

That old red ford capri

could tell a few tales 

but then again, so can I

it was a classic love story 

canoodling in the front seats

just about to drive over tower bridge

not anticipating the green light

embracing my lover

how embarrassing, when the car behind

had to use his claxon 

to separate our lips

lights now turned green 

 

oh, how I wish...

 

that traffic light, was forever stuck on red.

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 22nd, 2023 03:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: 🤣
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, L. B. Mek.
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

✔ Receive the ebook in seconds ✔ 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments9

  • orchidee

    That was me honking, spoiling your moments! lol.

    • Teddy.15

      Spoil sport lol 🤣 💖

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      Lol ) a lovely lighthearted writing , teddy 🙂 nicely expressed

      • Teddy.15

        Thank you dear Rose, made me smile your words. 💖

      • Neville



        I know exactly where you are coming from .. I have been following you, you see ..

        and without being too crude .. I woulda left my horn where it was and just jumped ya ...

        what a smashing little treat this turned out to be .. Ta Teddy .. ❤️

        • Teddy.15

          That is crude, stop pretending you are anything but a gentleman ❤️ lol 🤣

        • LIZ

          Mmmmm you play too much Teddy!! 😆 TEASE!! Loved it!! 💖

          • Teddy.15

            Oh Lizzy is this erotic enough? lmao 🤣 that's as far as it goes for teddy bear, thank you darling, just playing with you all. Actually I never used the word canoodle in a poem before lol 😂 💓💓💓💓

          • Doggerel Dave

            So that's how traffic jams occurred in London.....😂

            • Teddy.15

              LoL Oh no it was ally fault lol 🤣 thank you Dave for such a fun response.

              • Doggerel Dave

                Lost me slightly there, Teddy - Or was that the purpose of the exercise..... "ally fault"? 😂?
                However, You are welcome anytime.

                • 2 more comments

              • Pop64

                Wow, love the imagery here and the reminders of other times, youthful new times with that special someone. Beautiful!

                • Teddy.15

                  Yes, I was 18 lol 🤣 thank you dear Michael. 💖

                • orchidee

                  A very brief moment of 2 seconds when I did not sing! 🤣

                  • Teddy.15

                    That's not quite brief enough lol 🤣

                    • orchidee

                      Doh! lol.

                    • aDarkerMind

                      memories indeed Teddy;
                      I had a black 2L Laser Capri automatic for umpteen years.
                      sadly, never got to hump in it!
                      but fond memories none the less;

                      • Teddy.15

                        Hey I didn't hump either lol 🤣 thank you my dearest Melvin. 💖

                      • Goldfinch60

                        The lights are always red when Mary drives. LOL

                        Andy

                        • Teddy.15

                          lol good morning dear Andy, 💖 🤣 that's so sweet to know.



                        To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.