reflecting in verse
the richness of a poet?
is simply his soul.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Senryu - 5/7/5 syllables focusing on emotion.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 14
- Users favorite of this poem: aDarkerMind, Bella Shepard.
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indeed it is Teddy;
a true reflection as clever as always;
Thank you dear friend right back at you. 💜
In lines of three, you praised and encouraged many….lovely dearest teddy
My dearest Spills always so wonderful to see you, I'm so happy you have enjoyed my lines today, you know how much I love senryu and I'm always trying to invent the smallest poem ever lol 🤣 ❤️ thank you sweetest spills.
Good senryu Teddy - bit of French there? Sen-wotsit. lol.
LoL 😆 thanks orchidear. ❤️
I did a Haiku - did I? Someone said 'Bless you'. I said 'But why?'
They said 'Well, you just sneezed!' Hai-koo, atchoo! Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.
Perfectly constructed, beautifully expressed. Simple, yes. But oh, so profound.
My dear Bella you and I both love this form and I'm so honoured to share always with you. Thank you so much for your beautiful words dear friend. ❤️
I would not have known
If it had not been for you
My beloved friend!
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this is probably one of the finest examples of this poetic form I have ever come across .. ❤️
Wow, thank you dearest Nev, I'm humbled beyond words.❤️
Beautiful Senryu Teddy,
Andy
Thank you so much dear Andy. 💜
Touche Teddy
Grazie mille. ❤️
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