Senryu 1

Teddy.15

 

reflecting in verse

 

the richness of a poet?

 

is simply his soul.

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 24th, 2023 05:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Senryu - 5/7/5 syllables focusing on emotion.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: aDarkerMind, Bella Shepard
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  • aDarkerMind

    indeed it is Teddy;
    a true reflection as clever as always;

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dear friend right back at you. 💜

    • spilleronsheet

      In lines of three, you praised and encouraged many….lovely dearest teddy

      • Teddy.15

        My dearest Spills always so wonderful to see you, I'm so happy you have enjoyed my lines today, you know how much I love senryu and I'm always trying to invent the smallest poem ever lol 🤣 ❤️ thank you sweetest spills.

      • orchidee

        Good senryu Teddy - bit of French there? Sen-wotsit. lol.

        • Teddy.15

          LoL 😆 thanks orchidear. ❤️

          • orchidee

            I did a Haiku - did I? Someone said 'Bless you'. I said 'But why?'
            They said 'Well, you just sneezed!' Hai-koo, atchoo! Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.

          • Bella Shepard

            Perfectly constructed, beautifully expressed. Simple, yes. But oh, so profound.

            • Teddy.15

              My dear Bella you and I both love this form and I'm so honoured to share always with you. Thank you so much for your beautiful words dear friend. ❤️

              • Bella Shepard

                I would not have known
                If it had not been for you
                My beloved friend!

                • Teddy.15

                  And yours are simply marvelous 💖

                • Neville


                  this is probably one of the finest examples of this poetic form I have ever come across .. ❤️

                  • Teddy.15

                    Wow, thank you dearest Nev, I'm humbled beyond words.❤️

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Beautiful Senryu Teddy,

                    Andy

                    • Teddy.15

                      Thank you so much dear Andy. 💜

                    • peto

                      Touche Teddy

                      • Teddy.15

                        Grazie mille. ❤️



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