friendly compotision

vividvoid14

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD

Many an adage presents a doctrine, postulation on themes to change your life, , soul saving secrets that profess to eliminate life’s strife are often pressed in litany ,be it cloaked  in sacred chants, or a promised sojourn path to reach spiritual epiphany , a be all that you can be, confess that you are less, aspire, adopt their mantra, see life through culted eyes avoiding your demise just let them own your soul. Stop the madness , there’s no patent on the truth, there’s no one figure to salute, 
no testament old or new can make a better you. 
It’s a vector of simplicity, noted as we paraphrase what Glinda said to Dorothy, “within, you have had the power all along” 
or might we quote the Jackson Five “easy as One, Two, Three” cuz when you truly control your destiny self love is a priority, when you stay balanced with self respect it’s a power for all to see. In spite of those days that cast you shade follow that simple golden rule and others will react and treat you true  when better treatment of self and them is a constant tool. It will generate an energy that will be your honor to share, the difficult you will overcome as well as sporadic temporary pain ,
when your eyes stay on the target unselfish love is yours to gain  
So the simple lesson simply is just start from love within, start  each day and smile in the mirror, thats the best place to begin. 

 

 

 

A journey of self care, it's not so easy But the key to making sure the pain is brief. Love yourself, it's not selfish, it's key Make sure you're your own top priority. The world may be dark, but you have the light To turn your soul into a shining sight. Keep bettering yourself, in spite of all And you'll see your spirit glow, and you'll shine so tall!

  • Author: nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 24th, 2023 17:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: the first poem was written by my mentor Bobby O. you whould read his poems there amazing and the second poem was written my myself let us know who wrote a better poem
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  • Parisab

    Great job looking for mentorship in an intelligent and culturally sophisticated voice of Bobby O! You’re cool to want to expand your skills in a friendly “competition”

  • vividvoid14

    Thanks for the compliments on both sides

  • Bobby O

    Author author. You need spell check. The tulle of the piece is misspelled

    • vividvoid14

      haha i think your right
      or i just need to pay more attention



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