Jack's Depatrture.

Goldfinch60



The doorbell sounded,

I opened the door

And their stood Ced,

A friend for many years.

He had a very sad face

As he told me about Jack,

Jack had passed,

Passed a couple of weeks ago.

Jack was such a lovely dog,

The most laid back dog I knew.

I would walk into the coffee house

And he would be lying there,

Lying at Ced’s feet.

He may open an eye to see me

But he stayed laying,

Nothing stirred him.

Now he had gone,

Gone to that kennel in heaven

That place where all good dogs go

And they will be there waiting,

Waiting for their owners

When there owners come back,

Come back to take them,

Take them on a walk once more.

Goodbye Jack.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 28th, 2023 01:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: Jack was a Golden Retriever and was a lovely dog.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 15
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  • Teddy.15

    Goldens are so very special a sad day for his owner, sending hugs to all. A lovely poem dear Andy. πŸ’œ

    • Goldfinch60

      They are wonderful dogs Teddy, thank you for your kind thoughts.

      Andy

    • LIZ

      😒 I'm so sorry! But, this is so lovely!!

      • Goldfinch60

        Most kind LIZ, thank you.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        It's a terrible loss, losing animals or people. I'm sure there's kennels in heaven, though some say it's too sentimental to believe.
        I, and Fido, meet some woofers in walks, such as through some woods or along rivers. One guy had about 5 dogs - all his own?!

        • Goldfinch60

          There is a terrible loss Orchi, thank you for your words.

          Andy

        • 2781

          I don't think it's a coincidence that dog is God spelt backwards.

          • Goldfinch60

            It certainly isn't 2781, thank you.

            Andy

          • BlessedbyGod

            I'm so sorry about Jack, it's a sad day indeed😩πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯😩

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Melissa, much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Neville



              I have no doubt Jack shall be missed

              • Goldfinch60

                He surely will Neville.

                Andy

              • Thomas W Case

                Very touching. Well done.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Thomas.

                  Andy



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