On the edge of a dream

sorenbarrett

I never felt I belonged on the ground

a balloon in a bush of thorns

Ah, that I were a cloud looking down

a silk cocoon wrapped in a blue blanket that warms

 

Held in the arms of the sun

I would float on the wings of ethereal dreams

Lifted by the breeze, joining it as one,

in a strawberry sky, feeding on rainbow beams

 

Bathed in a shower of stars

Rinsed by the light of the moon

Dried by the passionate heat of Venus and Mars

Enchanted in unconditional love's womb

by a sirenic Morpheous tune

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 29th, 2023 04:15
  • Comment from author about the poem: Morpheous is the god of dreams
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Teddy.15

    You took me into my very own dream of reading such poetic verse. Wow wow loved your first stanza for the imagery I do love the clouds, a superb poem. You should definitely take a bow sir. Wonderful.

    • sorenbarrett

      Once again Teddy you humble me. Thank you for your most generous comments

    • L. B. Mek

      on the edge of dreams
      where poetic imagery
      is delivered exquisite
      abundant in each line...
      so well written dear Poet
      (vividity at its refined finest)

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you L.B. your encouragement is most appreciated

      • Pop64

        Aah, this read is magical with its created tone, rhyme and flow as they all weave into the write that provides beauty of the dream. Well done!

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you so much for your support and most kind words.

        • orchidee

          Good write SB.

        • Goldfinch60

          Wonderful words soren, I was taken there as well.

          Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much Andy I appreciate your comments



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