I'm wandering lonely as a cloud
my eyes even though grounded
I am floating
at least in my mind I am
moving slowly over ground
a bird’s eye view
of what could have been
a bird’s eye view
of the life I had always dreamed
and as I wander lonely as a cloud
I reflect on all that has been
and all that will be
and I am not scared
I am not
because I know
what is meant to be, will be
I believe in that
I believe in...
the dream.
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Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: inspired by William Wordsworth his poem (I wandered lonely as a cloud) Happy Saturday, always remember dreams can come true.
- Category: Reflection
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very touching Teddy.
and yes, am sure dreams can come true.
Ah this week I was offered a what they call fabulous book deal with no offerings what so ever for me, a company who work also with Borak Obama no less, they told me they were happy to publish my work if I paid for 200 copies of my own work. LoL 🤣 I told them very politely no thank you. Am I disappointed, of course but I would never give up writing because of it. I share with my friends that's the most joy and love I can ever have. Thank you dearest Melvin. Always my champion. ❤️
Dreams do come true lovely Teddy! We both know that. Believing is a huge part! It just never happens quite as we expect! "what is meant to be, will be"--but we CAN create...THE DREAM!! Loved it!! 💖💖💖💖
Yes my dearest Liz, we don't need to be completely obsessed it will all come if we believe that's what I believe and what is meant to be will be. Thank you my darling Lizzy, ❤️
Eh up 😂 🤣 she's back. Missed you with all my ❤️
Heyyyyyyyyy we missed you!!!
A lovely poem Teddy. What sort of cloud would you be?
The sort that floats happily without raining on parades lol a puffy happy cloud, who does the laundry and the cooking... ❤️
Lol. Sounds awesome. How about ironing? (fingers crossed)
Oh yes Also ironing and irony lol ❤️
I had a dream - married KP, then it became Cuckoo Land!
LOL 😂 for her I imagine
I love the sentiment of this poem, your words convey beautifully the peace and comfort found in simply allowing yourself to be. Dreams give us purpose, they move us forward, even when they don't end up where we thought. You have something very precious here, hold onto that dream dear Teddy.
Thank you my dear Bella, I had a run in with a book deal it didn't go well, but you know I believe in the dream, maybe one day. I'm already living many. Thank you dear friend. ❤️
I can remember my mother always saying to me "good things come to those who wait", and she was usually right. Your talent belongs with those who truly appreciate it, and they are there, waiting to cross your path. God bless dear friend!
❤️ I am here to share with all of you and vice versa that's enough for me. ❤️
May that dream become your reality Teddy.
Andy
Thank you ❣️
!Brilliant!
loving your 'airy' deft wording
dear Poetess
a joy to read and escape within
thank you!
('When all at once I saw a crowd,.
A host, of golden..'
..words, A poetic serenade
from a cherished Poetess
inking of freedom dreams
distilling life's ephemerality
and ease of heart, simplicity
if we but choose to accept
our limitations and learn
to let go and trust
in that same fate, which afforded
us, Breath...)
So very very kind of you my dear Mek, to write such a beautiful review truly humbled me always thank you ❤️
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