Talk About Stupid

Neville

Talk About Stupid

 

Talk about stupid

when I first

caught your scent

in a shell ..

For one stupid

moment,

I thought I could

hear, feel

and taste you as well ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 1st, 2023 02:28
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Teddy.15

    Maybe she was shy? I like this very much dear Nev. ❤️

    • Neville



      Awww .. neva say maybe .. the time between it and perhaps just hurts too much ❤️

    • LIZ

      Damn Neville!!! I can hear the.....frustration? I'll say it again....your titles are gold!!! 💜

      • Neville



        If I said I didn't give a damn .. then I would be tellin BIG porkie pies 💜

      • orchidee

        Good write N.
        Yep, know the feeling - the smell, taste, and hearing of KP and her botox!

      • Neville


        You are the weirdest guinea pig I have ever come across and believe me, I came across loads of em in Peru 🐀🦡🐁

        • L. B. Mek

          'Cuy al horno'
          🤢🤮🤕🤒😷🤯😱🤢🤮
          takes 'delicacy' to a scuttling low (for me, but what do i know)

        • Parisab

          Feels like the first time, everytime, and then you are wiser until the next time. This is what makes your poetry so charming and infectious.

          • Neville



            thank you my friend and I am an admirer of yours too and truly .. N

          • Goldfinch60

            The mind can achieve such wonderful things Neville, all it takes is one spark.

            Andy

            • Neville



              absolutely .. thanks for the tip .. I will take more care in future .. Neville

            • L. B. Mek

              many a perfume company
              have to take accountability
              for their manslaughter
              of shattered hearts, all over the world
              ...
              'and that's all
              I will say bout thaaaaat'
              in the wise words of Gump

              • Neville



                if I didn't know otherwise, I would think that might possibly be teen spirit you've been snortin 😎👍

                • L. B. Mek

                  lol
                  keepin' it young (at least at heart)
                  you know me well my treasured Hyung
                  our scars can sometimes help us
                  delay Time's savage rakes..
                  cheers to your wise eyes that see too much
                  but rarely word a meaningless sigh🍻



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