Autumn's Bow

Teddy.15

 

Birds flying south

 

under autumn's sun

 

stars hidden within clouds above

 

whirling winds bring leaves to ground

 

 softly touching safe and sound.  

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 2nd, 2023 01:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: My favourite season.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 15
  • Users favorite of this poem: aDarkerMind, Eileen Clark
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  • orchidee

    A fine write and pic Teddy.
    Yes KP has her Autumn too. Her botox fades, to leave her original face. I said 'Didn't recognise ya without ya botox!' lol.

  • orchidee

    A fine write and pic Teddy.
    Yes KP has her Autumn too. Her botox fades, to leave her original face. I said 'Didn't recognise ya without ya botox!' lol.

    • Teddy.15

      Gee my Orchidear, thank you twice lol 🤣 ❤️

    • LIZ

      Teddy this is my favorite season too! The colors, the weather...all of it!! Beautiful! 💖💖💖💖

      • Teddy.15

        Awe thank you dearest Lizzy, it's a stunning season not too hot not too cold but also pumpkin I adore them so also soup and roasted pumpkin time. Love all the colours of Autumn 🍁 ❤️ thank you dear Lizzy. ❤️

        • LIZ

          You and food 😆 See, now I need to go get a pumpkin spice latte coffee 😋 thanks for the inspiration lol 💖

        • Goldfinch60

          The beauty and wonder of Autumn is with us Teddy.

          Andy

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you dear Andy, it's our month isn't it. ❤️

            • Goldfinch60

              It surely is, I reach 3/4 of a century on Friday, 6th October.

              Andy

              • Teddy.15

                I'm just behind you by 26 years lol ❤️

              • Pop64

                A beautiful depiction of the season's change and all that comes with it. Enjoyed!

                • Teddy.15

                  So very kind of you to come by dear Michael, in the USA I know that autumn is equisite too. Thank you so much. ❤️

                • 2781

                  Hotting up down here.
                  I'm a little envious.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Well here it's still 30c not normal at all. So yes I'm too envious of the autumn for now we are in the hight of summer, strangely. So very kind of you to come by, thank you. ❤️

                  • Christina8

                    Beautifully said! For some reason its warming up here and I'm not seeing fall colors. I'm sure we will soon.

                    • Teddy.15

                      Yes here it's very strangely hot 30c and I'm not the only one thinking it's strange,.October a beautiful month for sure all over the world. Thank you dear Christine. ❤️

                    • peto

                      You capture it very well with so few words
                      Hidden stars
                      Whirling winds
                      Falling leaves
                      You got it mrs

                      • Teddy.15

                        Thank you so much dear Peto for coming by to my scribbles. It's not hard writing in Tuscany. ❤️

                      • Neville


                        There must surely be a subliminal message woven within these scant words .. because how else besides their sublimeness can I account for this smile ... Neville ❤️

                        • Teddy.15

                          You are probably smiling because you can see you and me sitting under Chelsea bridge enjoying the colours a beer in hand talking about lost love. LoL you got me kid. ❤️

                        • Michaelpoet

                          The picture matches the poem perfectly

                          • Teddy.15

                            Thank you so much !

                          • Saxon Crow

                            A perfect poem Teddy. From a perfect person

                            • Teddy.15

                              Awe my dear Sax, always a pleasure to see you. My scribbles are simple today, I'm on a break lol 🤣 or I was. Biggest of hugs 🤗 💖

                              • Saxon Crow

                                Perhaps you should be on a LOT of breaks Teddy. Ahhhh wistful sigh....

                                • Teddy.15

                                  Ah I mean from writing lol 🤣 but now I should be careful on the stairs lol 😆



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