Birds flying south
under autumn's sun
stars hidden within clouds above
whirling winds bring leaves to ground
softly touching safe and sound.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My favourite season.
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A fine write and pic Teddy.
Yes KP has her Autumn too. Her botox fades, to leave her original face. I said 'Didn't recognise ya without ya botox!' lol.
A fine write and pic Teddy.
Yes KP has her Autumn too. Her botox fades, to leave her original face. I said 'Didn't recognise ya without ya botox!' lol.
Gee my Orchidear, thank you twice lol 🤣 ❤️
Teddy this is my favorite season too! The colors, the weather...all of it!! Beautiful! 💖💖💖💖
Awe thank you dearest Lizzy, it's a stunning season not too hot not too cold but also pumpkin I adore them so also soup and roasted pumpkin time. Love all the colours of Autumn 🍁 ❤️ thank you dear Lizzy. ❤️
You and food 😆 See, now I need to go get a pumpkin spice latte coffee 😋 thanks for the inspiration lol 💖
The beauty and wonder of Autumn is with us Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy, it's our month isn't it. ❤️
It surely is, I reach 3/4 of a century on Friday, 6th October.
Andy
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A beautiful depiction of the season's change and all that comes with it. Enjoyed!
So very kind of you to come by dear Michael, in the USA I know that autumn is equisite too. Thank you so much. ❤️
Hotting up down here.
I'm a little envious.
Well here it's still 30c not normal at all. So yes I'm too envious of the autumn for now we are in the hight of summer, strangely. So very kind of you to come by, thank you. ❤️
Beautifully said! For some reason its warming up here and I'm not seeing fall colors. I'm sure we will soon.
Yes here it's very strangely hot 30c and I'm not the only one thinking it's strange,.October a beautiful month for sure all over the world. Thank you dear Christine. ❤️
You capture it very well with so few words
Hidden stars
Whirling winds
Falling leaves
You got it mrs
Thank you so much dear Peto for coming by to my scribbles. It's not hard writing in Tuscany. ❤️
There must surely be a subliminal message woven within these scant words .. because how else besides their sublimeness can I account for this smile ... Neville ❤️
You are probably smiling because you can see you and me sitting under Chelsea bridge enjoying the colours a beer in hand talking about lost love. LoL you got me kid. ❤️
The picture matches the poem perfectly
Thank you so much !
A perfect poem Teddy. From a perfect person
Awe my dear Sax, always a pleasure to see you. My scribbles are simple today, I'm on a break lol 🤣 or I was. Biggest of hugs 🤗 💖
Perhaps you should be on a LOT of breaks Teddy. Ahhhh wistful sigh....
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