The Map
There was once
a time golden,
when it all came
together
and I would spell
your name
backwards quite
simply ..
Because it made
It all seem
magic or special ..
And anyhow,
it was always so
very much
easier to find my
way home
when I wrote it
that way ..
Yes, there was
once a time golden,
when it all came
together ..
When we lived on
small talk,
free love and so
very much
laughter we often
ached all day ..
Back when we both
thought we
might last forever ..
But of course,
we never did, did we ..
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Mmmm 😔 but the memories remain? Remember, I'm that glass half full kind of a person, so as sad as this is....I'm CHOOSING to look at it as..."at least I loved" kind of way? So....Can't you still use those memories as a map? Just thinking out loud!! 💜
It's what I do too LIZ .. but sometimes the pen just seems to take over 💜
I know....I know. 💜
Pulling on my heart strings dearest Nev. This is beautiful and so emotional of lost love. ❤️
.. thanks dearest Teddy but tis but a poem ❤️
Well you did your job as the author (wink)
Such a shame those times never lasted Neville, I do hope they do one day.
Andy
.................. cheers GF60 💛
A fine write N.
Aww, why you not last forever?!
I'm getting old
You coming to the Battle of Hastings 1066 Reunion? Only people who were there in person can get in, such as Goldfinch and me.
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'When we lived on
small talk,
free love and so
very much
laughter we often
ached all day ..'
but that six-pack laughter legacy
of those good times you shared
remains, beneath life's fat debris
should chance ever afford you
a reason, to do a few sit-ups
in anticipation of love, revisiting
again...
I am such a a spoilt fan, dear Poet supreme
Thank you! Hyung
(Hope you and yours have a peaceful week) 🍻
I am more than honoured .. thank you brother M .. N
Love hurts.
indeed it does .. or so they say ..
And - you got that map? where ya going? when will ya back? And will ya have time to even get there, after wasting time reading my daft questions! lol.
............................................... U R 🦇🦇🦇
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