The Map

Neville

The Map

 

There was once

a time golden,

when it all came

together

and I would spell

your name

backwards quite

simply ..

Because it made

It all seem

magic or special ..

And anyhow,

it was always so

very much

easier to find my

way home

when I wrote it

that way ..

Yes, there was

once a time golden,

when it all came

together ..

When we lived on

small talk,

free love and so

very much

laughter we often

ached all day ..

Back when we both

thought we

might last forever ..

But of course,

we never did, did we ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 2nd, 2023 02:41
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 11
  • Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, Teddy.15, L. B. Mek
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  • LIZ

    Mmmm 😔 but the memories remain? Remember, I'm that glass half full kind of a person, so as sad as this is....I'm CHOOSING to look at it as..."at least I loved" kind of way? So....Can't you still use those memories as a map? Just thinking out loud!! 💜

    • Neville



      It's what I do too LIZ .. but sometimes the pen just seems to take over 💜

      • LIZ

        I know....I know. 💜

      • Teddy.15

        Pulling on my heart strings dearest Nev. This is beautiful and so emotional of lost love. ❤️

        • Neville



          .. thanks dearest Teddy but tis but a poem ❤️

          • Teddy.15

            Well you did your job as the author (wink)

          • Goldfinch60

            Such a shame those times never lasted Neville, I do hope they do one day.

            Andy

            • Neville



              .................. cheers GF60 💛

            • orchidee

              A fine write N.
              Aww, why you not last forever?!

              • Neville



                I'm getting old

                • orchidee

                  You coming to the Battle of Hastings 1066 Reunion? Only people who were there in person can get in, such as Goldfinch and me.

                  • Teddy.15

                    I'll come into battle with you the 3 musketeers and miss Teddy lol 🤣

                  • L. B. Mek

                    'When we lived on
                    small talk,
                    free love and so
                    very much
                    laughter we often
                    ached all day ..'
                    but that six-pack laughter legacy
                    of those good times you shared
                    remains, beneath life's fat debris
                    should chance ever afford you
                    a reason, to do a few sit-ups
                    in anticipation of love, revisiting
                    again...
                    I am such a a spoilt fan, dear Poet supreme
                    Thank you! Hyung
                    (Hope you and yours have a peaceful week) 🍻

                    • Neville



                      I am more than honoured .. thank you brother M .. N

                    • 2781

                      Love hurts.

                      • Neville



                        indeed it does .. or so they say ..

                      • orchidee

                        And - you got that map? where ya going? when will ya back? And will ya have time to even get there, after wasting time reading my daft questions! lol.

                        • Neville



                          ............................................... U R 🦇🦇🦇



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