The Fall

MendedFences27

The Fall

 

She fell in late September

the brown-haired blonde

with the red hints

or was she a redhead with blonde hints?

It seemed to change every day.

She displayed an air of warmth for several weeks.

She flirted and seemed to be temptation itself. 

She was fascinating, a colorful specimen

with features to attract a wandering eye

but there was an aloofness to her

as though she cared not what anyone thought.

One day she had the warmth and tenderness

of a summer lover

and next, she would send a chill down your spine.

I guess she was that certain kind of lover

where it was best to approach her on her days of warmth

and remain silent when she declines for cooler days.

Photographers traveled miles to get pictures of her.

Each would pose her differently

and she flashed her smile for them all

but then things changed. . . 

 

We knew something was wrong

when in a couple of months her hair 

began to drop off in clumps.

We gathered it all together and burned it

The experts said it was a natural thing

associated with her age and natural cycles.

Then, it became obvious 

as her hair was nearly all gone

it changed its color to white. 

Within weeks she was gone. . . 

 

and Winter arrived.

  • Author: MendedFences27 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 5th, 2023 21:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: Is it a natural cycle?
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, L. B. Mek
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  • Teddy.15

    Dearest Phil, one of the best ever autumn poems I've ever read, full of charm and beauty, truly breathtaking ❤️

  • L. B. Mek

    (Brilliant!
    Thank you for inspiring
    my feeble reply, cherished poet)
    calamity likes its cyclic patterns
    first comes that Spring of life
    where all is ubiquitous gaiety
    Then that heat of Summer passion
    where forever's
    taste as easy as candyfloss breath
    then fall arrives, scarfs and coats
    we feel that looming menace in that
    crisp, air
    then before we know it, it's a repeat
    of that too-late Winter
    and all is ash white warped dreams
    and frozen memory's, we fight
    to keep ourselves from forgetting
    falling asleep with muted screams
    of
    'I
    mustremember
    She must
    beremembered
    I can't forget
    I can't
    Let her die twice
    Whilst i still
    drawbreath....'

  • Neville


    I really like the way you did this Phil ..
    I could feel myself warming to her only to be frozen out of the picture by that unexpected twist you incorporated toward the end .. when winter eventually arrived .. very nice indeed sir Fences ..

    AGT's .. Neville

  • Thomas W Case

    Fantastic work Phil. Autumn described beautifully..



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