The flicker of life
In cosmological time
No more than a breath
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Author:
Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: How we take it for granted!
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- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, aDarkerMind, L. B. Mek
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Comments7
Yes, how indeed he gasped, having found this little gem after waiting so long for it ..
tis perfect Bella absolutely flawless .. Neville
Thank you Dearest Nev, you always pick me up when I feel I'm at my lowest. We've had drought here, and not just with the weather. Thank you for being there my friend!
Oh my dear Bella, you got the best ever senryu, I'd say you are an inspiration. ❤️
Dearest Teddy thank you so much, you are a light in my day. I can rely on my friends to help me back up when I start to falter, and there you are. I've had difficulty focusing of late, but I love being here and will continue to hopefully do my best. God bless!
You are worth gold my dear Bella you are a true poetess with so much to give in your talent, I am honoured to read your magnificent work always. ❤️
Your precious words are gold to me dear friend. I am privileged to commune with such a kindred and beautiful spirit, as you are.
In the grand scheme of things we occupy only a short moment, your words always have a punch to it Bella!
Thank you dear friend, so kind of you to read, and your comment is truly appreciated!
In cosmological time, we are still attached to the umbilical cord -
a fascinating read
How true are your words. Thank you so much for reading!
so, so true!
illuminatingly succinct
a great shorty, dear Poet
Just a moment in time Bella.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy, so nice to share the moment with such good friends.
Fantastic haiku.
Thank you dear friend, so kind of you to read, and truly appreciate your comment.
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