When I look at this world
And look at people
I wonder,
Wonder how they are,
If there life is good
Or if it is bad.
To my mind I hope
I hope they are happy.
I may be crazy,
Crazy to see others succeeding,
But to my mind
Life is a journey,
A journey for all,
For all to succeed,
As life is a journey
Not a competition.
May you all succeed,
Succeed in your life
As all life is wonderful
And we all deserve it,
Deserve that wonderful life.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 9th, 2023 01:12
- Comment from author about the poem: Have a good life.
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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Comments5
A fine write Gold.
Pity I ruined my own life, marrying KP! lol.
Thank you Orchi.
Absolutely! No competition!! I wish....I really wish people would understand that!!! We are all unique....and together we can accomplish so much....if only!!! Love this!!!!
Thank you LIZ, so true. Yes we are back to the "If only...?" once more.
Andy
Amen!
if I get a choice in the matter
I choose your perspective of life
my wise friend
thank you!
(hope you had a lovely weekend)
Thank You Mek.
Yes I had a great weekend.
Andy
❤️ you too Andy
Most kind Teddy, thank you.
Andy
what more could one possibly ask
Thank you Neville.
Andy
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