Why Else Wish Him So Blind
While these eyes may not be
what they once were ..
Do you really think me so blind
that I cannot feel what it is you
are doing ..
When you play away like that ..
I know precisely who it is
you are now literally screwing ..
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I see how it boiled in your soul. It's a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I'm wrong.
You are not wrong .. in fact, you are write .. but a real gent neva tells .. does one .. Neville
It doesn't take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x
I am a great believer in karma .. thank you C .. x
Need me to F somebody up? π‘ Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! πππ
You are too kind LIZ .. its good to know someone has your back covered when its up against the wall .. π
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KP won't be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is 'me, me, me!;
Poor thing ..
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.
Thanks Phil much appreciated my friend .. Neville
All I can say is "What goes around...comes around", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!
................... thanks a million B .. N
Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.
Andy
You bet'cha bill squire
Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free β€οΈ
there's a whole lot of water gone under the bridge since I first scribbled this .. thank you Teddy .. β€οΈ
ermm one of your more
ermm 'literal' poems my friend
that imbues more emotionality
than any words could, clever
(but hey
it could have just been
a Blighty bank holiday
since, you know
how we love our screws
and hammers, and making a mess
on those Monday's
we're left having a staring match
with Time and our home..)
too much comfort
always
a prerequisite, trait
of all
two-timing morons!
(there is no gun
to your fckn head
save your partner
from needles heartache
wait, one fckn night
have a conversation
say your goodbyes
then be all the randy rabbit
you want...)
morons! I'll never get it
ever
there is no why to it
(unless they're
emotionally pushed in-to it
by their own partner's actions
like a retaliation thing
but that's not 'cheating' per say
that's just a release of wrath..)
..
I got carried away again Hyung
forgive me
Thereβs nowt to forgive, Iβm just sorry it has taken me so long to say a proper thank you .. thank you M .. N
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