Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
While these eyes may not be
what they once were ..
Do you really think me so blind
that I cannot feel what it is you
are doing ..
When you play away like that ..
I know precisely who it is
you are now literally screwing ..
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I see how it boiled in your soul. It's a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I'm wrong.
You are not wrong .. in fact, you are write .. but a real gent neva tells .. does one .. Neville
It doesn't take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x
I am a great believer in karma .. thank you C .. x
Need me to F somebody up? 😡 Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! 💜💜💜
You are too kind LIZ .. its good to know someone has your back covered when its up against the wall .. 💜
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KP won't be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is 'me, me, me!;
Poor thing ..
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.
Thanks Phil much appreciated my friend .. Neville
All I can say is "What goes around...comes around", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!
................... thanks a million B .. N
Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.
Andy
You bet'cha bill squire
Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free ❤️
there's a whole lot of water gone under the bridge since I first scribbled this .. thank you Teddy .. ❤️
ermm one of your more
ermm 'literal' poems my friend
that imbues more emotionality
than any words could, clever
(but hey
it could have just been
a Blighty bank holiday
since, you know
how we love our screws
and hammers, and making a mess
on those Monday's
we're left having a staring match
with Time and our home..)
too much comfort
always
a prerequisite, trait
of all
two-timing morons!
(there is no gun
to your fckn head
save your partner
from needles heartache
wait, one fckn night
have a conversation
say your goodbyes
then be all the randy rabbit
you want...)
morons! I'll never get it
ever
there is no why to it
(unless they're
emotionally pushed in-to it
by their own partner's actions
like a retaliation thing
but that's not 'cheating' per say
that's just a release of wrath..)
..
I got carried away again Hyung
forgive me
There’s nowt to forgive, I’m just sorry it has taken me so long to say a proper thank you .. thank you M .. N
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