Why Else Wish Him So Blind

Neville

Why Else Wish Him So Blind

 

While these eyes may not be

   what they once were ..

Do you really think me so blind

that I cannot feel what it is you

   are doing ..

   When you play away like that ..

I know precisely who it is

   you are now literally screwing ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 10th, 2023 05:12
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Natalie Gladmir

    I see how it boiled in your soul. It's a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I'm wrong.

    • Neville



      You are not wrong .. in fact, you are write .. but a real gent neva tells .. does one .. Neville

    • Christina8

      It doesn't take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x

      • Neville



        I am a great believer in karma .. thank you C .. x

      • LIZ

        Need me to F somebody up? 😑 Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

        • Neville



          You are too kind LIZ .. its good to know someone has your back covered when its up against the wall .. πŸ’œ

          • LIZ

            πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

          • orchidee

            KP won't be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is 'me, me, me!;

            • Neville



              Poor thing ..

            • MendedFences27

              If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
              Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.

              • Neville



                Thanks Phil much appreciated my friend .. Neville

              • Bella Shepard

                All I can say is "What goes around...comes around", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!

                • Neville



                  ................... thanks a million B .. N

                • Goldfinch60

                  Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.

                  Andy

                  • Neville



                    You bet'cha bill squire

                  • Teddy.15

                    Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free ❀️

                    • Neville



                      there's a whole lot of water gone under the bridge since I first scribbled this .. thank you Teddy .. ❀️

                    • L. B. Mek

                      ermm one of your more
                      ermm 'literal' poems my friend
                      that imbues more emotionality
                      than any words could, clever
                      (but hey
                      it could have just been
                      a Blighty bank holiday
                      since, you know
                      how we love our screws
                      and hammers, and making a mess
                      on those Monday's
                      we're left having a staring match
                      with Time and our home..)
                      too much comfort
                      always
                      a prerequisite, trait
                      of all
                      two-timing morons!
                      (there is no gun
                      to your fckn head
                      save your partner
                      from needles heartache
                      wait, one fckn night
                      have a conversation
                      say your goodbyes
                      then be all the randy rabbit
                      you want...)
                      morons! I'll never get it
                      ever
                      there is no why to it
                      (unless they're
                      emotionally pushed in-to it
                      by their own partner's actions
                      like a retaliation thing
                      but that's not 'cheating' per say
                      that's just a release of wrath..)
                      ..
                      I got carried away again Hyung
                      forgive me

                      • Neville


                        There’s nowt to forgive, I’m just sorry it has taken me so long to say a proper thank you .. thank you M .. N



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