Teen nightmare

peto

There's no time like the present 

To get it off your chest 

You have to tell us what you want to say 

Dont think about the future 

Your cardiac arrest 

Is slowly creeping closer every day 

 

Steel cred

Who's dead 

Who's being intravenous fed

Who's been shot and who's next for the chop

I know 

You know 

Everybody says so 

Can't you tell us who you're gonna drop

Great fight 

Last night 

Screaming siren 

Blue light 

Dead and dying lying in the street 

No shame 

Just fame 

Don't play him at his game 

You go in cold expect to feel the heat 

You may pack

You may whack

Keep your eyes off his back

Don't be thinking he can't turn around 

When you feel 

It's your deal

Time to turn the big wheel 

That's the day you end up in the ground 

Triple wide 

False pride 

Must stand 

Can't hide 

Got to face the world and all it's got

Insane sharp pain

Face down in the cold rain 

Realising that he's just been shot 

Blood flows 

Life goes 

Yet the legend still grows 

Late teens he never stood a chance 

Stood tall 

Fought all

Just a kid who took the fall

This is murder 

This is not romance 

 

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 11th, 2023 00:50
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Christina8

    really great poem/story you have here. (btw I'm so happy you are back!) Did you shake things up a bit with your rhyme scheme? I like it a lot! You have a way with words and this is written really well. Great job!

    • peto

      Thank you Christina
      Aye a wee bit
      After 1st verse I tried to make it a bit like a rap
      Really appreciate your time

    • BlessedbyGod

      Wow, so very powerful peto,
      I can relate to this piece with certain people in my life, Brought tears to my eyes,

      • peto

        Thank you blessed
        A common theme
        Sorry about the tears
        Extremely grateful for your words

        • BlessedbyGod

          Your good, any poet that can bring out real emotion is an incredible artist

        • LIZ

          This one's very different from your usual, and I love it. Made me think of a young person with dreams, who ends up facing the realities of life. Can't hide, and even when fighting, gets hit hard. So…..say what you mean, and mean what you say….NOW. Because eventually, death is at our doorstep, and then, there's no point. Just thinking out loud!! Welcome back!!!

          • peto

            Love that input LIZ
            Thank you very much
            Extremely grateful as always
            Glad to be here

          • Bobby O

            Way to present strong phrase that attempts to diminish the shameful glorification of brutality. Thanks for this piece. Great job.

            • peto

              Bang on as per Bobby
              Love that you saw this for what it is
              Many thanks



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