O' Day, glorious day
today I’m free to wonder anywhere I like
so I’ve put my finest hat on
I shall go for a leisurely stroll
around town
I have no cares at all today
just sharing my time with the birds
who’ve come down to feed on the bread
I’ve generously spread on the ground
I’ll watch the ducks in the small river
floating up stream
and I’ll quietly wonder, where are they going?
I'll take a gentle breath of fresh air
when I see someone I know
I shall stop to say hello
after all, time is mine today
and when I finally arrive home
I shall open the door wide enough
welcoming new air
swapping it with the old
In hope…
It may blow me in the right direction.
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Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: October 12th, 2023 01:47
- Category: Reflection
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A breath of fresh air! ✨️ Transformative at times! May take you exactly where you need to go! Enjoy 😉 💖
Sending it your way too beautiful Liz. Thank you my dear poetess friend. ❤️
This is very pleasant.It sums up a wonderful day out.Delightful
Thank you very much. ❤️
I wasn't expecting such a breath of fresh air on such a wet pre-winters day .. I enjoyed where you took me this mane Teddy .. thank you Neville ❤️
My pleasure dear Nev. ❤️
An upbeat thought and sense of freedom to wonder where ever we like even if we can't wander. Loved it.
Thank you ❤️❤️❤️
You blowing hot or cold, or both?! lol.
This inspiring breath of fresh air allows all of us to just take all the time in the world, like you and with you too. Thak you for sharing this truly feel good piece. - Michael
Thank you so much Michael, seems fitting for today, things are a bit sad in the world. I'll truly try to find some inspiration for some more gentle walks to share with you all. ❤️
You lady
Are already heading in the right direction
Hope it doesn't blow you OFF
nicely done
Thank you dear Peto, so very kind of you to come by and say. ❤️
this was my first read of today Teddy;
hope you had as good a day as me.
dark, overcast, a little rain.
but my day blew me in the right direction.
I have much to learn from you my friend;
Words of much comfort to me my drear Melvin, always humbled by your approval of my scribbles. Thank you dear friend. I've had the flu probably COVID but I'm ok now. ❤️
Fresh air, sunshine, and a "stroll" sounds like the perfect day. A gentle breeze to clear the "air" in your home, and "hope" that you are on the correct pathway sounds like a great plan. And, while you are at it, why not write a lovely poem. Nice work. - Phil A.
Thank you dear Phil, some days are simply glorious and through all the strife it's important to remember for us all. Thank you so much for coming by dear poet. ❤️
Beautiful words Teddy, those kind of walks give us so much peace within ourselves.
Andy
Thank you my dear Andy. ❤️
Beautiful!
so delicately paced and worded, dear Poetess
a Spring stroll of a read, just lovely
Thank you my lovely poet friend. ❤️ take care in London ok. ❤️
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