And then
the night
comes flooding
in, like
a spilled beer.
Fear is a
rabid bat;
fatally
infecting.
Loneliness is
an ice cube
in a bathtub
melt-
ing
slow-
ly.
Love is a
flat toad in
the road of
life.
Hope is a
broken dish,
an empty
pocket,
a shattered dream.
Life is a sparrow
in the cat's mouth,
an abscessed
tooth, with no
antibiotic.
It's a whale
in a frozen
ocean;
an eagle in the
city.
Insanity is
digging for the
courage to
continue
day after
day
after day.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 12th, 2023 14:26
- Category: Reflection
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Comments8
oh my!
the striking picture grabbed me.
then. your striking words took over.
day after day after day;
impressive stuff;
Thank you very much.
We must be insane then, because regardless of how difficult things seem to be , we still keep pressing on and moving forward wanting to strive for a better tomorrow!
Great piece my friend
Thank you very much.
Night, fear, loneliness, love, hope, and insanity are elements pictured in this poem, like a stunning painting. Thanks for sharing this, I hope that you visit few more poems of mine…
Thank you, I will.
Right back at you, amazing I'm glad you have found ADarkerMind too very similar styles extraordinary ❤️ welcome to MPS Sir.
Thank you.
Good words Thomas but love in my world will never be flat.
Andy
Thanks Andy
WIth a title and picture to match.
The insanity needed just to live.
Depicted perfectly.
Great write!
Amazing writing! Very talented ☺️
Thank you so much.
Masterfully written here Thomas, the imagery you've used; perfectly sums up the absence of light, and the underlying point you make, the darkness that humanity makes; in order to profit from it everyday, comes across emphatically.
Like the consensus who've commented, I also like the picture that accompanies your words, very Wednesday Addams, and very pertinent to the season.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
Thank you so much, I appreciate it.
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