Your sweetness if not tasted
could never be understood
an angel created in centuries past
intended as a being to resist my task
like weightless leaves swept up
by the lightest of winds
you fall into my heart
your light burns resistant to
my weakened eyes
who beholds your light
could never turn away
to observe any other sight
I now see...
the depths of eternal worth.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: October 13th, 2023 15:24
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: aDarkerMind, L. B. Mek
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Comments7
I know how much you admire dante
So hardly a surprise he brought the best out of you
The last verse is stunning
Thank you dearest Peto, your words mean so much. ❤️
the most touching side of you I have seen Teddy.
beautiful.
Dante himself would applaud such talent, of that I have no doubt;
LoL oh I was just imagining if we were. So very humbled by your words darling poet.
Your words are lit, and Dante would love the light and fire beautifully placed in your lovely poem…
I cannot thank you enough dear Parisab. I'm quite a fan of Dante Alighieri and I live in his home town. I am incredibly humbled to know.that another poetess knows him well. Thank you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Your city is one of those special places I have visited, which took me back in time…Thank you …
Wonderful tribute Teddy.
Andy
A tribute to me lol ❤️ thank you Andy.
Good write angel!
LOL well if I didn't write it to myself who would ever.write it! LoL thank you my dear orchodear. ❤️
Excellent work and use of language to paint the scene. Well done.
Very kind of you to come by to read. Thank you dear Thomas. ❤️
simply Beautiful!
Muse inspiring, A muse
Poetic legacy, enriching
refinement of a Poetess'
ink
meanwhile Poesy's truth
lives on...!
LOL this should be called "a love letter to myself"lol thank dear Mek. ❤️
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