My posts now fast approach the ton
Some good some bad some just for fun
With nectar poisoned ink would run
You took away my numb
For julian I have deep respect
This site has let my thoughts reflect
And lay them bare without regret
You took away my numb
To newcomers struggling to write
The veterans who seem out of sight
All started off like you one night
You took away my numb
To those who chose to be my friend
My gratitude will never end
I've also loved the words you penned
You took away my numb
The time has come to leave the stage
Returning to an empty page
My feelings locked back in their cage
A few more still to come
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Author:
peto (
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This is beautiful! You already know....your writing helps so much. Even the ones you think don't, are a faucet of untolds! "A few more still to come".....a number of unknowns. Reading between the lines, I get it more than you know! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
No doubting it LIZ
You get it
And I appreciate it
Always grateful to you
Another beautiful poem. Taking away a numb is a gift.
Indeed it is
Truly appreciate your time sir
Many thanks
Wonderfully written! You talk about those who chose to be your friend, trust me we feel the same about you! I think your writing goes both ways, it takes away your numb, and it brings us joy. I hope you have many poems left. I need to get my pen....
Thank you Christina
I really appreciate your encouragement
It never fails to move me
Extremely grateful as always
Can't wait to see what your pen has to say
I stately declare the honor is here and I imagine many that follow feel much the same. You are a monster of touch.
Bobby
Your comments are legendary
And of course much appreciated
Many thanks
Ditto my friend, you are also a blessing , your work is great and inciteful,
Your words are intriguing and healing as well, thank you dear friend for writing this piece, wr appreciate you as well
Thank you blessed
A lovely thing to say
Always grateful for your kindness
Much obliged
Powerful. Great work.
Thank you Thomas
Your poems have a regal tone to them. It’s been truly special to be connected through this platform. Your words have so much more to offer and they “take away the numb” poet friend…
Parisab
Your whole demeanor has a regal tone to it
I appreciate your time and input very much
Thank you
Your words are kind and humbling…
A wonderfully written tribute here peto, and I totally agree, MyPoeticSide is a warm and talented community, where words are shared and friendships are made. So, likewise in your second stanza, I would also like to thank the kind sir who planted the seed.
Like you, I look forward to sharing more, and like many others, I look forward to reading more of theirs and of course, yours.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
Thank you scribbler
I really do appreciate your time to read and comment
As well as your continued wish for my wellbeing
Much obliged
Oh this is lovely, you took my thoughts and put them down on paper so much better then I could have done, thank you. 🙂
Thank you Eileen
Truly appreciate it
Extremely sorry for such a late reply
I have a same poem, my poetic side.
Excellent muse
I apologise for the late reply
Truly appreciate your visit
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