Advice on Learning to Fall

Neville

Advice on Learning to Fall

 

Remember

my lovely,

to always run fast

   and run free ..

 

And don’t ever

be afraid

tho’ my darling,

      to jump high ..

 

But remember

my lovely,

to always land

     lightly and roll with it ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 24th, 2023 01:56
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Sounds like instructions for me as I train to become 'The Birdman!' lol.

    • Neville



      You really ought to be in Alcatraz

      • orchidee

        If I could break the iron bars, could I fly out through the window and escape?

      • Teddy.15

        Ah welcome back my dear Nev, with sound advice as always. ❀️

        • Neville



          Bless You Teddy .. its good to be back ❀️

        • LIZ

          Welcome back!!!! You know....because I'm a bodybuilder...the "landing lightly" makes a lot of sense to me. So, yes, give it your all, GO HARD, BUT, remember to pay attention to how and where you land! Loved it!!! πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

          • Neville



            May Bodhidharma smile down upon you Liz .. Many of my most sincere thank you's & best wishes my friend .. Oh' n not a lot of folk here know, but I taught Shorinji Kempo a martial art for many years Google it .. so I know how to fall ... Thanks again our LIZ πŸ’œ

            • LIZ

              Neville I'm so grateful πŸ™ Thank you! AND you're kidding!!! I happen to know what it is. I haven't practiced it, but.....how awesome is that!!!! You're full of surprises!! πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

            • MendedFences27

              Sound advice on how to break a fall and to survive a broken heart. A very clever poem. Much enjoyed. - Phil A

              • Neville



                Thank you my friend, as always very much appreciated Phil .. Neville

              • Bobby O

                Alas , both. Prepare but never fear, and keep your wing tips shiny.

                • Neville



                  What an absolute on point and otherwise amazing review .. tis a gift I shall treasure my friend .. and thanks for the tip too .. advice much needed and subsequently heeded .. πŸŽΆπŸŽΆπŸŽ΅πŸ‘

                  • Bobby O

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