Notice of absence from LIZ
PEACE, LOVE, LIGHT!
PEACE, LOVE, LIGHT!
Broken words drive my pen, spilling secrets that I've kept. But my ink's not scared of them; voicing things I dare not say.
A confession in a way, draped in rhyme, finding strength. Thoughts that fall out of my brain, when my mind can't find its way.
Each expression leads the way, and explains my inner state. Oozing lines, written terms, of emotions that won't rest!
The releasing of a verse, when my mouth's too dry to spell. Dripping feelings that I've kept, with the sweetest aftertaste!
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Author:
LKA (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 25th, 2023 00:22
- Comment from author about the poem: CONFESSION
- Category: Love
- Views: 33
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, MendedFences27, Introverted Sage, peto, Bella Shepard
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Fantastic flow Liz. I really like this. Great work.
Thank you very much!! I appreciate it 🙏
Lyrics my dear Liz, your last lines a gorgeous the sweetest aftertaste ❤️
Thank you so much my lovely Teddy!!! You always put a smile on my face!!! 💖💖💖💖💖💖
When it comes to taste .. you clearly have it ..
but its that sweet aftertaste that lingers isn't it that always does it ..
it seems we have been thinking along similar lines already .. while confessions may be good for the soul and for poetry .. remember folks, its condoms are good for the economy .......... 💜sorry, couldn't resist .. Neville
Ahhhhhh yes that aftertaste!! It's the best! Neville!! You and I are definitely
on the same page! AND ummmmm we might as well!! There are many flavors and colors to choose from!!😆😆😆😆💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Oohh, try something shallow. Save some energy of being too deep!😁🤣
Nah! You try deep lol 😆
Ooh I better try it then! lol.
Telling the untold and unsaid Liz... Lovely lines, too sublime... This is why I love poetry.
Awwwww thank you! Me too!!
I used to have that feeling, of relief purging my feelings on paper. Getting that exhale expelling what’s been weighing you down.
You have displayed every feeling I used to take away from writing.
Beautiful confessional.
I hope people continue to seeing you for you and your writing will continue to be your therapy.
Thank you very much! Writing is definitely therapy for me. 🙏
Anything of DEEP concern cropped up? 😁
And why did I turn up to write this useless comment?! Cooeee, goodnight soon! lol.
Nah nah 🤣🤣
Beautiful piece and I caught that Janet thing. PAC prolly wondering
What have you done for me lately.?
Thank you Bobby! I happen to like the music video to that one a lot!
Dig! I’m looking for that lady movie review, maybe?
Well worth the wait
A tremendous confession draped in rhyme
Extremely subtle
Yet so powerful
"Voicing things I dare not say"
You don't seem shy or the type to hold back
Makes this line even more powerful
Magic
Awwwww thank you so much!! I usually don't hold back.... but sometimes....you know?? 🫣🫢
Your lines are so profoundly beautiful. Heartfelt and cathartic, they resonate with new found confidence and liberation. You go girl!
Thank you very much Bella!! 🧡🧡🧡
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