Sun On The Sea,

Goldfinch60



We just could not understand,

The forecast said it would rain,

So how come we were walking,

Walking along the beach,

Walking in the blazing sun.

We walked for about two hours

Amongst the sand and pebbles

Meeting others who were doing the same,

Such enjoyment.

The sea swept in gently,

So very clear.

Some clouds were in the sky

But only there to enhance,

Only to enhance the beauty,

The beauty of Nature’s glory

As we walked hand in hand

Along the wonderful seashore

On that beautiful day.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 25th, 2023 01:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: It did rain but not until the evening when we were enjoying our evening meal.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 11
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Comments5

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi.

      • orchidee

        You spot that prisoner?!

      • LIZ

        Oh the beauty of nature and love!!!! 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚

        • Goldfinch60

          Yes it is so wonderful LIZ, thank you.

          Andy

        • arqios

          Just as well that our movements and future are not 'cast' beforehand. All's beautiful that ends well, I suppose. Good stuff here.

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true CB, thank you.

            Andy

          • Misunderstood

            Your poem shows that you must be having a beautiful time.

            • Goldfinch60

              We certainly are M, thank you for your comment.

              Andy

            • David Wakeling

              Life doesn't get much better than that.Well done mi amigo

              • Goldfinch60

                It certainly doesn't David, thank you.

                Andy



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