And All Before Our Awakening
Did you hear me
just then
check my breath ..
Just to see
if you were still
breathing ..
And did you see,
the corners
of my lips move
due north ..
Before forming
twin arches
and the broadest
of smiles ..
No of course not,
my darling ..
But I assure you,
they did
marry and match
those subtle
shaped brows
of yours,
while you were
obviously
dreaming my love ..
So did you by
any chance feel
my pulse and my
heart both
racing, to be first
to greet you
come morning ..
Again not,
I fear, so where
were you
then my dear ..
And pray whose
gentle
eyelash flutter
did wake us both
from our so
very deep slumber ..
On the occasion
of this,
our first truly
shared morning ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I post this here today in memory and to honour two dear friends who I hope may have kinda liked it .. I dont know where they are, but I fear their light may be shing somewhere else .. if you knew either Fay or Dusk, have a drink on them with me this evening, since both had hearts & nibs of solid 💛.. cheers Neville
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Sending all my love to both Fay and Dusk and to you Nev, two of the most charming and kind poetic hearts who are forever missed here on site. Hoping they are both well. ❤️ ❤️ and one for you beautiful Nev. ❤️
Many & I do mean many, HUGE thanks Teddy .. Sadly I am not optimistic I know DA was very poorly and Fay would not leave without saying her goodbyes .. I am planning a little embu for them come this weekend .. Neville ❤️
Keep me updated sweet Nev, would be the saddest day ❤️
Fantastic work. Beautiful.
Who you callin beautiful .. you handsome devil .. Cheers TW .. Neville
Sending out love to Fay and Dusk. they have been so missed on this site. Give them my love if you can. They would've really liked the poetic nod.
I shall reach out to them both at the weekend with a little embu I have been planning and practicing .. I doubt whether they will see it, but hope they shall feel the vibrations .. thankyou & most kindly C .. Neville
A really great tribute.
Again, you may never know just how much your words mean to me .. and I think both Fay & DA would be blushing .. With BIG thank you's & Kindest of Regards, Neville
Good write N.
Write good O.
Neville
I hope you find some answers
Dusk arising is always so kind when commenting
As for Fay slim
A diamond and I know how close you both are here and elsewhere
Heartfelt
Though shocked me a bit
Bit gutted if honest
thank you Peto, yes it would be good to know what, why, where & how .. very sad indeed, but wishing you and yours all the very best of all good things, Neville
Neville it’s reassuring to know that you care so deeply, may you find some answers…
I find it reassuring that so many others, both openly and indeed, more in privately, share my concern .. but point taken and very muchly appreciated my very dear Parisab .. Neville
I'm not familiar....but still...the emotions are felt. 🙏🙏🙏🙏 sending prayers!
many thanks LIZ both were long time buddies & each could spill the most perfect ink .. 💜
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