This is Us ..
Your pain my
love
quite simply
hurts me
far too much ..
I can not
bear to feel
you suffer so ..
When
you burn,
I do blister
and when you
bleed
my heart,
then
I bleed too ..
Indeed,
this ache we
share is
all consuming ..
Who
passes first
I fear,
shall never
let the other go ..
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You can feel the pain of your loved ones. Me? I don't care about KP's pain. She brought it all on herself - the pain of botox going saggy! lol.
I bet she wishes that your fur and your beard both grow backwards and choke you
I'm a furry guinea-pig friend to all and sundry - except to KP! lol.
Oh yes, you can always feel your spouses pain. And the end is a thought we must not think about too much or we'll go mad--who will pass first?
if that is a guessstumate then you are very close .. thanks a million for trying Christina8 .. but dont forget, madness is my bread n butter .. Neville 🙂
When....you become....ONE.....💜💜💜💜💜💜
Ha .. I guess so, I can hardly remember that far back .. 💜
That is the sweetest and most painful thing.... who goes first can be such a pain. A contemporary film captures this scene: The Notebook; where the couple expire together atop the hospital bed.
I shall check that out CB .. in the meantime, I shall thank you, for checking in .. Neville
https://youtu.be/0j2aAf-oLOg?si=OBb9vjTEsetUMlJw
ending scene, hospital bed...
.............................. Checked .. Cheers .. 👍
This is beautiful and real. It hit me like a gut punch, the last two lines especially. It's difficult to deal with and harder, I imagine, to write about it. I have no more to say except I hope you all find the peace you seek. - Phil A.
I am well and truly both blown away and honoured Phil .. HUGE thanks my friend & truly .. Neville
My dear Nev, such sadness in such beauty, I have a great friend who literally went through this, it fathoms me how he did it with such dignity but he did. A stunning capture of soulmates and Indeed many other types of love, when I was really young it's what I felt about my mother. ❤️
My very dearest of Teddy's .. I am both honestly honoured and humbled that you should regard my little scribble so highly .. Thank you so much .. Neville ❣️
I read this, Neville, and failing to find the words, I read it again, and still failed. I am mightily impressed how you find words so hard to find.
This write stays with me. It hits hard sir. 🙏🏼
I am mightily honoured and near struck dumb Garth, but am, besides being flabbergasted both honoured and humbled kind sir .. thank you so much my friend .. Neville
A forever testimony that is a credi owned and assumed by both
there ya go, spoiling me again with kindness .. bless you Bobby O
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