Tu Es Tout Pour Moi

Neville

Tu Es Tout Pour Moi

 

Oh’ how I ache,

for all those

things you do gift

but are yet still,

to be remembered ..

And how I do

long for the scent

and the sense

of you near

and all around me ..

Yes and how

I do bleed into

sand, dust and dirt

and again,

upon rainbows ..

And all for the sake

of saving a pair

of honour and souls ..

But how you

do frown when I lay

down beside you

and exclaim that yes,

I do indeed love thee ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 31st, 2023 00:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: it is, what it is and it aint, what it aint ..
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: LIZ, Teddy.15
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  • LIZ

    Ayyyyyyyy 🫣🫣🫣🫣 your everything!! Dirt AND rainbows! Worth it, with all that it comes!! 💜💜💜💜

    • Neville



      I know, I'm just a dirty old fella about to get scrubbed up before work .. Thanks for noticing LIZ 💜

      • LIZ

        🤭🤭🤭💜💜💜

      • Teddy.15

        Ah the romantic side of Nev, yes yes yes. ❤️

        • Neville



          thank you sista .. such flattery will get you anything and everything Teddy .. ❤️

        • orchidee

          Good write N.
          Bit of German there in the title?!
          I don't long for the pong of botox when KP is near me. lol.
          Does it have any smell?

          • Neville


            I told you before, the manufacturers insist that it does not have any odour or scent whatsoever .. apparently though, it may react with the positive salt ions in tears or sweat and presumably other bodily fluids and the host or recipient may think they can smell themselves .. in which case its all olfactory Mr. O ..

            • orchidee

              Eau de Guinea Pig! lol.

            • Thomas W Case

              Another one gets slammed out of the park. Nice work.

              • Neville



                Ta Thomas .. that's thanks around these here parts .. not sure whether the same applies around your neck of the woods .. I know cheers does .. so cheers just in case it doesn't .. Neville

              • MendedFences27

                I was taken aback by this one. You "ache, long, bleed, and love" and receive a "frown." Otherwise, a great piece of poetry, "and again upon rainbows," "the sense of you." " are yet to be remembered." Not just your average phrasing. - Phil A.

                • Neville



                  Don't you just love em Phil, rainbows that is .. thank you my friend for your most adept reasoning and encouragement .. Neville

                • Bobby O

                  The frown hanging there adds a weight to my shoulders, it’s cumbersome especially when it may be predicted and yet doesn’t slow us down. It’s irrational and yet most who have committed resource in the past feel it’s due to turn, so we stumble forward with unreasoned plan, but the frown is honest and therefore a base of advantaged certainty.

                  • Neville



                    Such a sapiential perspective and vision is both precious and most gratefully received Bobby O .. You are a credit to our species sir .. Neville

                  • arqios

                    That, the exquisite ache signifying we live and not merely exist!

                    • Neville



                      You've been there too I see .. thanks CB .. Neville

                      • arqios

                        Makes one think if there be any other way....



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