You're so sweet when
you're bleeding, and you're
needing that cock.
You're so lovely when
you study.
Let me give you
this rock.
Don't blame it on
emotion,
the ocean still rolls in.
Don't call it love,
when we both know
that it's sin.
I don't care about
the weather
when the shit
hits my veins.
I don't care about
the tether,
when I'm going insane.
If you were here,
I'd kiss you,
make my troubles
go away.
The problem lies
in the fact that I can't stay.
You can suck on me,
suck the poison from
my soul.
Keep me young.
Never grow old.
I'm always watching you,
through the Windows
of my mind.
My heart is true
even though my
soul is blind.
I dream of fucking you
in the darkness
Of your cage.
I want to slide it in
so you can feel all of my rage.
You're going to take it
Just like you took everything
From me.
I once was blind
But now I see.
I miss you,
but not as much
as I miss myself
I love you
but I hate my fucking self.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 31st, 2023 04:06
- Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes, I write songs as well as poems.... Here's a dark one Happy Halloween.
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Comments8
thoroughly enjoyed mate & then some
Thank you Sir.
Oscillation / Meandering
Seems the profanity wasn’t born of anger toward her but rather , though floated indirectly, actually enhanced the mentioned self loathing. Hard to understand amongst the peaceful terrain of Roy Marble and Ronnie Lester
Thank you, kind sir. I had a soundtrack and was commissioned to put words to it, let's just say the music needed something raw, Robert Frost like wouldn't cut it. Lol
I like this touch of darkness ! It makes me feel less alone !
Thank you kindly.
LOL fabulous, beautifully done ❤️ I was going to try choosing a fave stanza but actually I love them all. ❤️
Thank you so much.
Ahh, a bad hair day for this gal. lol.
lol, thanks.
Ohhhhhh I love it! Dark and erotic....truthfully my favorite type of poetry!!! Perfect for today!!! Bravo!!!!
yessssss, Thank you Liz.
The darkside in the spotlight.
Yep, thank you for commenting. Happy Halloween.
I very much enjoyed this
Thank you Sir.
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