In this game of chance
We will see on the ‘morrow
The hand we are dealt.
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Author:
Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 3rd, 2023 15:00
- Comment from author about the poem: After an absence of almost 3 weeks, on vacation, have to ease back in slowly. The brain was on vacation as well.
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Oh I love your play on morrow, that is superb
And so true we will indeed. You have surpassed your own skills in Senryu because there is nothing to say but kudos on every single one ❤️
My dearest Teddy, before you I hadn't even heard of a senryu, so I am beholden to you sweet friend, I learned from the master. Thank you for you always inspiring me.
Great work.
Thank you so much, your reading and commenting is greatly appreciated!
Good write Bella.
Those (three?! Doh!) brain cells come back from vacation too?! heehee.
They did indeed come back, hoping to add to them to have a full set of 12, I think, my counting skills are not that great either. Thanks Orchi!
nothing short of excellent Bella ..
Thank you dearest Nev, I always love to see your pic there, gives me confidence. Take care my friend!
May that hand be your winning hand Bella.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy for your lovely wish!
Good to have you back..
Thank you my friend, so good to be back with my wonderful compadres!
Nice and clever piece! Really enjoyed this!
Thank you so much!
There is a reason that cards are dealt face down. Good write Bella.
Thank you my good friend. I've always been one never to turn a card over until all are dealt. Call it superstion, can't shake it.
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