Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

Somewhere Beyond Our Goodbyes

 

Look beyond the symmetry

of a perfect horizon

and note how the silver edge

arcs along those

shifting, unfamiliar lines,

like a smile arches upwards ..

Come walk with me

and let us sip the moments ..

Let us each rejoice

and ache together, for soon

the tide, shall turn against us ..

And then, we shall go

our separate ways, with just

a sorry farewell wave,

yet such, exquisite memories ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 5th, 2023 04:24
  • Comment from author about the poem: ... when ghosts and guilt get in the way 🤍
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: LIZ
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  • orchidee

    A fine write N.
    I said to KP 'Goodbye' a thousand times, but she comes back every time! I told her there's no need to hurry back, then under my breath said 'good riddance!' heehee.

    • Neville



      I insist you write out ten zillion times & in CAPITALS .. I MUST NOT EXAGGERATE

      • orchidee

        All these stories of KP and I are true, of course! 😁

      • Thomas W Case

        Truly beautiful.

        • Neville



          You are way to generous Thomas, but also, very muchly appreciated too sir .. thanks a bundle .. Neville

        • LIZ

          Which is why it's important to enjoy every single moment!! Beautiful!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

          • Neville



            ................................................ exactly, how reassuring .. thanks LIZ 💜

          • Christina8

            Wonderful poem and I think "let us sip the moments" sums it up perfectly!

            • Neville



              I'm glad you noticed Christina8 .. many thank you's .. Neville

            • Goldfinch60

              May that light always bring happiness to your memories Neville.

              Andy

              • Neville



                Nice thought, but then you are a nice geezer Andy .. Cheers

              • Dove

                Heartfelt Write Dear, parting is so sad, but an embrace so sweet. Enjoy the moments while they are here.

                • Neville



                  Bless you again dear Dove .. Neville



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