Dancing in the eye of the storm.
Wings stretching out past regulated norms.
Fire within begins to take form.
Water surrounds maintaining the warm.
Not to be consumed lightning flows from within.
Gracing the way to what's been hidden.
Take the pathless path or what's forbidden.
Chains only work, when your mind is the prison.
Lay it bare as the waves flow through.
Reflected in all that you do.
Teaching to create your own cool.
Reguate the pattern or become the fool.
~I.S.~
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Author:
Introverted Sage (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 6th, 2023 02:05
- Category: Nature
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Good write I.S.
Thank you 😊
I love the line teaching to create your own cool nice thanks
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed
It says many things and that needs to be saluted On my second read I used a personal filter and thought of the times I felt overwhelmed by what I thought was an unfair set of circumstances and chose to place effort to expose these (in my mind) tragic inequities. I think I learned from this piece to admit perhaps those moments were closer to a pity party than a genuine crusade. So, amidst all else the piece offered my main takeaway was to remind “don’t lie to yourself “. Thanks
I love that you were able to apply it to yourself and find meaning!
That's exactly it too, our mind can be our worst enemy sometimes and honesty saves everyones time.
Thank you!
You’re a monster w the pen. Glad I know you. I wrote a very explicit piece and ousted it. Maybe that’s not your style and that’s cool
Yes, I do my best to avoid those lol
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