A Whispers' Breath

Dove

In dreams I sail upon a whisper's breath,
A tender breeze that carries me afar.
My spirit soars, unburdened by the earth,
To realms unknown, where wonders truly are.

 

With gentle grace, I drift upon its tide,
Through ethereal mists, a tranquil flight.
Embracing silence, I let go my pride,
And lose myself in this celestial light.

 

No words can capture what my soul now feels,
As I surrender to this whispered song.
My heart, unbound, in unison it reels,
In harmony with whispers that belong.

 

Oh, sweet release, this floating on a sigh,
A whispered journey, where my spirit flies.

  • Author: Dove (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 7th, 2023 04:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by Neville: Floating on a Whispered Breath
  • Category: Fantasy
  • Views: 5
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Comments4

  • orchidee

    I shall whisper that this is a good write V!

    • Dove

      Thanks Dear Orchidee!

    • MendedFences27

      Beautiful poetry. Sonnet-like in a way.
      Very mystical in tone. Loved the way you structured this. A dreamful flight of fantasy and illusion. - Phil A.

      • Dove

        Thanks Phil!💗❤👍

      • Goldfinch60

        Float away in the love of life Dove.

        Andy

        • Dove

          Thanks Andy!.💗❤👍🌷🌞

        • Neville



          this is far more betterer than wot I writ ..
          but I am honoured and take my hat off to you Dove for crafting something literarily this sublime .. ma'am .. Neville 🤍🕊️



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