a ray of light so strong
it felt as though
I had been struck fiercely by a bolt of sun
I can but gaze upon this powerful
yet gentle fiery flame
I stand bewildered
touched by a vision so soft
encouraged by softened breeze
although weakened by blindness
a presence of wings in sight
I am aware of such beauty
and gracious divine light
created just for a moment
heaven has fallen to earth
never will I understand
yet, I do believe in this wondrous being
this magnificent brightness disappears
and in total triumph
I stand and gaze...
I've been touched by an angel today.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: November 8th, 2023 02:50
- Category: Reflection
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a BIG 👍from me Teddy .. ❤️
Thank you dearest Nev. ❤️
and I have been touched by your poem Teddy.
Awe thank you my dear Melvin, may an angel touch you dear friend. ❤️
Beautiful!!! Why was I flinching my eyes the whole time? Ohhhhh the light!!! Thank you Teddy!!! I indeed, I have been touched! 💖💖💖
Awe thank you dear Liz. May your angel find you my darling friend. 🩷
You are truly touched by an angel in this beautiful poem dearest Teddy. May that ethereal presence watch over you always, and give you divine inspiration. Love the pic, she's beautiful.
Thank you dear Bella, I hope she visits all of us, all those in pain and all those who need her. 🩷
I think that is the very best wish!
Beautiful work.
Thank you dear Thomas. 🤗
You deserve that Angel's touch Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy. Your words warm my heart 💜
Some beautiful lines:
"I had been struck fiercely by a bolt of sun"
Very nice in its thought and also in its composition.
Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret. 🌹
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