Dad and the creaky window.

David Wakeling

The house wasn’t as old as my father,
However some parts were starting to creak,
He detested outliving my mother,
And  wanted a still house that didn’t speak.

His small bedroom window had a loose screw,
And it made a rattling sound day and night.
It made a sound whenever  the wind blew,
He would call out her name , “Joan”, in fright.

I comforted him by reading  Milton,
He would open his eyes and seemed at peace,
“ I am worried about that window son”
I smiled trying to put his mind at ease.

“ It is just that rattling old window dad,
It’s a sound you’ve heard many times before,
“Your are so right”, he said, ”and I am glad”,
“You are my good son, my good son and more.”

“You are not worried about the window,”
“No”, he said “ I am ready to just  fly”,
“I would like an apple before you go”
“I always loved the taste of apple pie.

As the night pranced along he passed away,
Even the wind ceased its endless dance,
Perhaps it understood in some strange way,
The death of  greatness should be in silence.

  • Author: David Wakeling (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 8th, 2023 14:20
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Comments4

  • Thomas W Case

    Stirring and moving tribute.

  • Soman Ragavan

    Did this poem appear here before ?

  • Goldfinch60

    Emotive words David.

    Andy

    • David Wakeling

      Indeed.It is hard to lose your Dad

    • gray0328

      Thank You David for reminding me how blessed I am to still have my 86yr old father.

      • David Wakeling

        Indeed. Thanks for commenting



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