One small voice

sorenbarrett

A domino tips

One gear slips

A house of cards begins to fall

A single stitch rips

A paradigm shifts

One small voice changes all.

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 9th, 2023 13:13
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Comments3

  • orchidee

    Good write SB.
    I thought paradigm was a pair of dimes (U.S. money). lol.

    • sorenbarrett

      You're right orchidee and I figure that that is about what a few words are worth now days. Thanks for the review and smile.

    • Teddy.15

      Imagery is superb and so too the metaphor. 🩷

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks so much Teddy I appreciate the review and most kind words

      • Goldfinch60

        So very true soren.

        Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks so much Andy for the review



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