That Morning.

Goldfinch60



I drove along the road

On this bleak November day,

It had been raining,

There was a mist in the air,

But as I pulled in to the car park

My best friend pulled in as well.

We were going to play croquet,

Just the two of us.

As we walked to the lawn

The sun started shining,

And all was well.

We played,

We chatted,

And had a wonderful morning

So happy in each other’s company

Playing the game we love.

Each game was decided,

Decided on the final hoop,

But that morning

Winning did not matter,

We both played well,

But the best thing

Was that we enjoyed our friendship,

And that meant more,

More to us than anything,

Than anything else that morning.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 11th, 2023 01:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: It was a great time with my best friend.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 10
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Orchi.

    • LIZ

      Awwwww fun!! Beautiful friendship!! 💫

      • Goldfinch60

        Very true LIZ. thank you.

        Andy

      • Thomas W Case

        Beautiful.

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind Thomas, thamk you.

          Andy

        • Bella Shepard

          Such a friendship is a treasure, and you a very fortunate man!

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true Bella, yes I am. Thank you.

            Andy

          • John Prophet

            Totally beautiful!

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you John.

              Andy

            • Neville


              Happy days are always good to recollect .. and to write about too of course ... Neville

              • Goldfinch60

                So true Neville, thank you.

                Andy



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