Fallen

Teddy.15

 

My darling

if you ever have doubts of my love

 

know that since you've been gone

my heart has too

lost within my very soul

I sleep alone

yet, I dream of you

 

the only thing I hold in my palms

are tears that bleed

from my aching eyes

tears of lost love

and as they slip through my fingers

so do you

 

my darling

if you ever have doubts of my love

 

know this…

even when the great Raven visits me

in the fall of the moon...

I will still be awaiting

your return. 

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Comments7

  • Bella Shepard

    So softly and tenderly, you've captured in this poem the aching heart for one who is gone. As always, a beautiful pic to accompany your beautiful words.

    • Teddy.15

      So very kind of you dear Bella, thank you so much dear friend. 💜

    • LIZ

      Teddy 😭😭😭😭 Oh my God this is so beautiful! So....soft...delicate...careful!!!! Loved it! 💖💖💖

      • Teddy.15

        Awe, thank you my dear Lizzy, thank you, always humbled to know my scribbles are enjoyed. 🩷 🩷

      • Goldfinch60

        Wonderful words Teddy and they are so true to me.

        Andy

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear Andy. 🩷

        • Neville



          reads like a beautiful mourning song
          .. ❤️

          • Teddy.15

            It's for our soldiers who never came home. ❤️

            • Neville



              Like I wished to imply .. a beautiful individual, national & international mourning song .. ❤️

            • Accidental Poet

              Simply beautiful Teddy. 👍

              • Teddy.15

                Hello my dear A.P thank you so much, so lovely to see you. 🩷

              • Thomas W Case

                Absolutely gorgeous and sad. Wonderful poem.

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you so much dear Thomas. 🩷

                • sorenbarrett

                  A poem so full of sorrow and missing someone. It touches the heart

                  • Teddy.15

                    So very kind of you dear sorenbarret, thank you for coming by. 🩷



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