Whispered

Neville

Whispered

 

no one was looking

so he hid

a whispered secret

deep

within the perfect

folds

of the new babies

ear ..

and she smiled back

at him ..

knowing for sure 

in that

whisp of a whisper ..

she was

more than just merely

loved ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 14th, 2023 03:12
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 15
  • User favorite of this poem: LIZ.
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Comments7

  • orchidee

    A fine write N.
    I whisper in KP's ear sweet nothings - I only whisper: 'I got no more money for your botox today, dear!' lol.

    • Neville


      they say an Englishman's home is his castle .. mine has a moat, a drawbridge and turrets .. I wonder if an English guineapig's hutch has a moan, a g string and Tourette's ..

    • LIZ

      Awwwww so beautiful!! Babies are the best secret keepers!!! 🤭💜💜💜💜

      • Neville



        Hey LIZ I didn't realise you were awake .. but bloomin glad you are & yes, my little granddaughter has not said a word yet .. 💜

      • arqios

        To be more than loved and in both directions twice as blessed!

        • Neville



          Thanking you is becoming something of an acquired reflex CB .. Cheers .. Neville

        • Thomas W Case

          Beautiful work.

          • Neville



            Cheers Thomas .. Neville

          • Christina8

            Wonderful poem, Nev, no doubt about your adorable granddaughter, such a sweet poem!

            • Neville



              Bless you Christina8 ..

            • MendedFences27

              It won't be the first time you "whisper" in that "baby's ear." Grandad's can share many "secrets" with granddaughters, and it's all because of that "smile." A beautifully gentle poem. - Phil A.

              • Neville


                Ah' I get the distinct impression you've been there before Phil .. thanks for sharing my little pleasure .. Neville

              • Goldfinch60

                May that whisper bring more than love to you Neville.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  You are a little golden wonder sir many thanks .. Neville



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