An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
When we first met
her hair was
the same colour as
tropical sand
caressed by waves
and the sea ..
So when I close my
eyes slow now,
I can maybe still
find us,
on an empty beach
somewhere
and with any luck
about to become
naked ..
Although we are
never alone are we ..
They just
placed a camera
and a microphone
inside the belly
of my mandolin ..
How else can they
possibly
continue to rape
and abuse us ..
Now that our pride
and dignity are gone ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Mandolin eye and a belly-full of strumming…makes for interesting days.
There's just never a plectrum around when ya need one though is there .. cheers CB .. Neville
Sometimes the tip of a keycard or library card will have to do… 💳🪪😁
Mmmmmm long, lost, abused love? Just a thought....💜💜💜💜💜
it's more than just a thought though isn't it LIZ .. its one o them that makes ya think UFFFF innit ..💜
Good write N.
I wanted to write 'A certain kind of aloneness - without KP'. Well, I suppose I hardly see her in person - only on TV, in papers, etc, or if I collect her from the botox clinic. She's there 23 hours of every day. lol.
I suspect that you are destined to forever be alone .. but hey that leaves the rest of us 8 billion or so to have loadsa fun ..
this really touched me thank you it feels so vulnerable and distant at the same time 🙂
and You my friend are far too generous .. many very sincere thank you's are now on their way way to you .. Neville 🤍
Best not the open beach, sadly .
Lock the door, draw the curtains...oh, and leave the mandolin outside.... Evokes though a strong feeling of nostalgia of course, the first part - the rest I'll take with a grain of....sand....
You aint still delirious are ya .. and why, when I close my eyes, do I imagine you scratchin yourself all over .. in a corner, you old Dog you 🙂
Imaginative...creative.. you'll be doing a verse or two next................................................................ Certainly scratching my facial fungus after seven weeks..🧔♂️
You two need a room? Meanwhile, I'll just look the other way. 👍
we had a room but wore it out .. Oh' and thanks for turning the other cheek my friend .. 😎👍
The least I can do for fellow poet. 😀
That pride and dignity can be re-awakened Neville and all will be fine.
Andy
Cheers Andy .. but don't fret .. sometimes my pen as a mind of its own and takes over ..
Excellent work my friend.
Very kind sir and much appreciated also 🙂
Neville
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