DEPARTURE

LIZ


Notice of absence from LIZ
PEACE, LOVE, LIGHT!



The hardest, unexpected goodbyes. 
Wanting to stay, but knowing it's time.
Fighting for closure, but there isn't one.
Choosing yourself, now THAT, my friends, is the greatest high! 

  • Author: LKA (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 19th, 2023 05:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: People will take, as much as you allow them to! ALWAYS choose yourself! PEACE OUT!!!!
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 39
  • Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard, Teddy.15
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  • Muse Gong

    very good

    • LIZ

      Thank you!

    • orchidee

      Oh lol, at around 6:30 in the video, she's in deep misery. it would be deep, wouldn't it?! heehee.

      • LIZ

        Oh yeah!

        • orchidee

          Doh! I randomly looked through the video, then it got 'deep' - it would! lol.

        • Neville


          I hope there is more to this than I am able to fathom & that I am remarkably wrong .. 💜

          • LIZ

            Ah Neville! Your intuition is on point!! 💜💜💜💜💜

          • Bella Shepard

            You have showcased "integrity"in this poem, in spades. Kudos!

          • Teddy.15

            Choosing yourself is indeed the greatest and highest gift dear Liz, although I say I'm so sorry to see you going off, I do hope you will come back to share more of your heartfelt poetry/ songs because you are one of my favourites. We all need a break from forums that's for sure. Biggest of hugs to you my darling friend of MPS. ❤️

          • Goldfinch60

            So true LIZ, without ourselves we would get nowhere.

            Andy

            I hope you are not away for long.

          • Thomas W Case

            Hell yes. Great write Liz.



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