Waiting for a saviour - A response.

Saxon Crow

And while all the wickedness upon this world 

Consumes and corrupts us all. 

We fail to forget one tiny little thing

It's not God to blame 

But all our faults 

And while we bemoan the

Ineptitude of God

Which is easy for us to do 

We forget that God gave us morals

And showed us the right thing to do

So yes I'm waiting for my saviour

One day he will return

And gently he'll remind us

Well, you lot. I told you so. 

  • Author: Saxon Crow (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 29th, 2023 03:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: God shows us wrong from right and how to live a good life. It's not God's fault that people choose to ignore it
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  • Views: 15
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments4

  • Accidental Poet

    Well Sax, I would have to agree with you. Any problems in our world are not the fault of God, but of a self-inflicted society. We created the problems, we're responsible for fixing them. Too many people want to shift the blame to God. It's a society as a whole problem. Great write my friend. 🙂👍

  • orchidee

    Good write SC.

  • Doggerel Dave

    Gotta put the blame somewhere......... This God of yours sounds like a convenient scapegoat...
    Neat write though, Sax.

  • Goldfinch60

    But your step mum did not ignore it and still she was taken in an awful way!

    • Saxon Crow

      And that is God's fault? Why not Satan's?

      • Goldfinch60

        Because organised religion is a farce and makes you believe the things that do not exist.

        Andy



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