Surrender

sorenbarrett

Feel no alarm, when nature's arm, draws you in to her sweet absorbing core.

Absolved of all pain dissolved with the rain in peace and rest forevermore.

Do not resist, your brow has been kissed, lay down in her soft embrace.

Trust in her fair mothering care, in death there's no disgrace

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 12th, 2023 11:27
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • orchidee

    A fine write SB.

  • Doggerel Dave

    Could well make it to a tombstone, Soren. A polished piece on polished marble

    • sorenbarrett

      So right Dave it could be. Thanks for the review and kind words.

    • Eugene S.

      Great little piece. Love the rhyme scheme.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks for the read and kind words

      • Goldfinch60

        So very true soren.

        Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks so much Gold.

        • Thomas W Case

          Beautiful.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks so much for your most kind response.



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