I Need To Visit France

Thomas W Case



I dreamed I was at some sort
of carnival/expo with my
sister and my ex.
Somehow, I got separated
from them
I met a young French woman.
She was beautiful, and she
Liked me a lot.
There was a lot
of passion and an instant
connection.
I had cuts all over my
face for some reason.
She liked me anyway.
In fact, she didn't even
mention the cuts.
The attraction was strong.
There was a heat I
could smell.
We started making out,
and we were just
getting ready to do it,
when we noticed a
large crowd behind us.
We laughed, and she wrote
her information on my
hand.
Later, I was playing
with a bear, and some other
strange animal.
I fell in a river, and her
phone number and address
were washed off my hand.
I never did find my
sister and the ex.
I woke up, and felt
Sick to my stomach.
Why are all the
good ones in dreams?
I need to visit France.

  • Author: Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2023 21:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: My most recent book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems is available on Amazon.com.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Cassie58

    A frustrating dream. Especially the phone number and address of that French babe being lost like that. Strange how mixed up dreams can become. Still, this had a touch of spice about it. You need to dream more often.

    • Thomas W Case

      Thanks for the read and comment.

    • Bobby O

      Visualize before you realize

      • Thomas W Case

        Thanks for the read and comment.

      • orchidee

        You gone to France? lol.

        • Thomas W Case

          Thanks for the read and comment.

        • sorenbarrett

          Some dreams can be unfulfilled and frustrating.

          • Thomas W Case

            Yes they can. Thank you.

          • Neville


            Maybe we should form a cult .. France really is something else .. Reads like a wake up call .. Be sure to book them tickets .. Neville

          • arqios

            The waking segment of a day can really put us into a spin!



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