I have always wanted to love you,
I want to love you in looks and glances with attachment for images,
I want to love you like you own my eyes in any crowd,
I want to love you in your good days and in seasons when your day is too rough for words,
I want to love you in the knowledge of where to kiss when it hurts,
I want to love you in playlists of songs that we sing together,
I want to love you in poems and and in places that are almost as beautiful as your face when you smile,
I want to love you in food and in trying something new just so we can make it ours,
I want to love you in long and short journeys and still enjoy the distance,
I want to love you infinitely a way none of these words would ever encapsulate,
I want to love you in a way that gives your life highlights to always replay,
I want to love you in a way that every heartbeat of mine is a poem written for you,
I want to love you with a permanence that supersedes eternity,
I want love you in a way that the stars will finally be my witness telling you more about me.
- Author: Job Welime ( Offline)
- Published: December 14th, 2023 08:22
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Beautiful poem my friend, she is one lucky lady to be loved like this
Cheers for reading dear friend
Loved it
Sometimes it’s a style that is dictated by content and mood but other times it’s just easy to fall back on. I loved the content and the sentiment though I wonder if using the pronoun “I” so often served to impart Declaration of import or if shifting to another option hear and there might be considered. I’m gonna take a shot at the last paragraph honoring its intent without the redundancy of “I”
A building desire to love you in such a way that it’s supersedes eternity elevating my gift of love, almost reaching the stars and now they may bear witness as I share more of me with you.
For your consideration ….
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