From a Little Book of Sins

Neville

From a Little Book of Sins

 

such is life ..

such are relationships ..

and such are our tribulations ..

then of course, we write about them ..

and somehow create a kind of delicious circle ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 16th, 2023 15:07
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Delicious? Not much keen on tropical fruit actually prefer cool temperate - so its still plums and cherries for me... lychees make a close second...or third depending on how you count 'em; mind how you spit the pips....
    That reminds me: water melons have something.. You can do delicious circles with the pips if you know how to form the lips....well maybe not a full circle, but certainly a classic parabola ...... memories....

    I shot a watermelon pip in the air,
    And it fell to earth I know exactly where.............Gotcha!

    • Neville



      who said you can't teach an old dog new tricks .. magic sir .. I'll take it as they come .. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • arqios

      Poetry is often a personโ€™s โ€œlittle black book.โ€

      • Neville



        Damn write .. I may even change the title to 'Abstracts from a Little Book of Big Sins'

        • arqios

          Guns blaring upon returning from your getaway! Mustโ€™ve been oh so good!

        • Thomas W Case

          Truly superb.

          • Neville



            As is so often the case Mr. Case, you are way too generous .. but I thank you regardless .. Neville

          • Cassie58

            Wonderful. I saw the sharp angles of the pyramid, or triangle if you prefer, after time softening and becoming rounded like a circle. This is a little gem. A bauble to hang on my Christmas tree. ๐Ÿ’œ

            • Neville



              No kiddin .. shoulda gone to Specsavers .. Only kidding Cassie58 it is such an honour to be strung up like that .. some folk I know would willingly pay for that kind of support .. ๐Ÿ’œ

            • orchidee

              Yes, I often write of my tribulations with KP. lol.
              Water melons? Will I swoon?!

              • Neville



                its such a shame you are so fixated on this KP delusion .. in my professional opinion, you are probably now beyond fixing

                • orchidee

                  Yes lol. But I married her one Halloween, when she hid the water that I add to my gin. I got drunk and said 'I do, trout!' lol.

                • Accidental Poet

                  Your secrets safe with me, I don't know about Orchi though. ๐Ÿ™„

                  • Neville



                    Cheers .. who does ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

                    • Accidental Poet

                      Fido knows. ๐Ÿถ

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So true Neville, those words we write can explain our life.

                      Andy

                      • Neville


                        Thanks for seeing it my way Andy .. Neville



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