Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
Glow
she had a strange light
all about her,
which she wore like a
pair of drawn
curtains, to let all her
shadows
breathe easy, she said ..
and while
those she did cast both
fore and aft,
appeared golden, not
one of her
disciples then glowed ..
but in that
moment she stumbled
and fell, each
one of those disciples
could tell she
was far from perfect
and her robe
was but sackcloth, hastily
throwed ..
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That glow will always be with her and in your mind though Neville.
Andy
intermittently perhaps but the inspiration for this particular little scribble is now long gone ..
A fine write N.
KP has the glow of a trout. lol.
There's something fishy going on between you and your imagination Steven .. Neville
That sackcloth sears quite deeply in the mind.
I hear it's next years new velveteen 👍
That glow and the drawn curtains makes me think of a working gal. A lady of the night, maybe. Sackcloth though? Would have thought she might have worn something a little softer to the touch. It seems she was troubled by all her shadows. I can understand that. Bills have to be paid. Children have to be fed. What an intriguing write. My imagination seems to have gone awol with this write Neville. Glow though, has a certain warmth to it. Captivating writing for sure from your prolific and varied pen.
You are very warm Cassie .. I mean in terms of being close to the target .. & elsewise too I imagine 🙂
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Beautiful work.
Thank you for stopping by TWC
Quite possibly fun while it lasted... I hope the 'disciples' weren't too bitter....
most of the one's I've tasted were sweet .. not like honey sweet but ..
Crossed wires here I feel, but this is the way language expands to encompass new realities....etc....
.. maybe
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